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@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
 
 Yahweh continues telling Moses what the people must do.
 
-# the first month, on the fourteenth day of the month ... the fifteenth day of this month
+# the first month, on the fourteenth day of the month ... On the fifteenth day of this month
 
-"the 1st month, on the 14th day of the month ... the 15th day of this month." This refers to the first month of the Hebrew calendar. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-hebrewmonths]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-ordinal]])
+"During the first month, on day 14 of the month ... On day 15 day of this month." This refers to the first month of the Hebrew calendar. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-hebrewmonths]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-ordinal]])
 
 # comes Yahweh's Passover
 
@@ -18,9 +18,9 @@ This can be stated in active form. "you must have a feast" (See: [[rc://en/ta/ma
 
 This can be stated in active form. "you must eat bread without yeast" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
 
-# the first day
+# On the first day
 
-"the 1st day" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-ordinal]])
+This refers to the first day of the feast. This can be stated clearly. AT: "On day 1 of the feast" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-ordinal]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-explicit]])
 
 # there must be a holy assembly to honor Yahweh