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-\v 28 In this way, Joshua captured Makkedah on that day and killed everyone there with the sword, including its king. He completely destroyed them and every living creature there. He left no survivors. He did to the king of Makkedah just as he had done to the king of Jericho.
+\v 28 In this way, Joshua captured Makkedah on that day and killed everyone there with the sword, including its king. He completely destroyed everyone in it. He left no survivor in it. He did to the king of Makkedah just as he had done to the king of Jericho.
 
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 \v 29 Joshua and all Israel passed on from Makkedah to Libnah. He went into battle against Libnah.
-\v 30 Yahweh also gave it into the hand of Israel—along with their king. Joshua attacked every living creature in it with the sword. He did not leave a survivor alive in it. He did to the king just as he had done to the king of Jericho.
+\v 30 Yahweh also gave it into the hand of Israel—along with their king. Joshua struck it with the edge of the sword and every person in it; he left no survivor in it. And he did to its king just as he had done to the king of Jericho.
 
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 \v 31 Then Joshua and all Israel with him passed on from Libnah to Lachish. He camped by it and waged war against it.
-\v 32 Yahweh gave Lachish into the hand of Israel. Joshua captured it on the second day. He attacked with the sword every living creature that was in it, just as he had done to Libnah.
+\v 32 Yahweh gave Lachish into the hand of Israel. Joshua captured it on the second day and struck it with the edge of the sword, and every person in it, just as he had done to Libnah.
 
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 \v 36 Then Joshua and all Israel passed on from Eglon to Hebron. They waged war against it.
-\v 37 They captured it and struck with the sword everyone in it, including the king and all its surrounding villages. They completely destroyed every living creature in it, leaving no survivors, just as Joshua had done to Eglon. He completely destroyed it, and every living creature in it.
+\v 37 They captured it and struck it with the edge of the sword, and its king and its villages, and everyone in it. They left no survivor it, as they had done to Eglon, they totally destroyed it and every person in it. 
 
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 \v 38 Then Joshua turned, and all the army of Israel with him, and they passed on to Debir and waged war against it.
-\v 39 He captured it and its king, and all its nearby villages. They struck them with the sword and completely destroyed every living creature that was in it. Joshua left no survivors, just as he had done to Hebron and its king, and just as he had done to Libnah and its king.
+\v 39 He captured it, its king and all its nearby villages. They struck them with the edge of the sword and completely destroyed every person in it. They left no survivor. They did to Debir and its king as they had done to Libnah and its king and to Hebron. 
 
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23-ISA/33.usfm

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-\v 15 He who walks righteously and speaks honestly; he who despises the gain of oppression,
+\v 15 He who walks righteously and speaks honestly; 
-\q1 who refuses to take a bribe, who does not plot violent crime,
+\q1 who despises the gain of oppression,
-\q1 and does not look on evil—
+\q1 who shakes his hand so that it will not accept a bribe, 
+\q1 who stops his ears from hearing about bloodshed,
+\q1 and who shuts his eyes from looking on evil—
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-\v 16 he will make his home on the heights;
+\v 16 this is the man who will dwell on the heights,
-\q1 his place of defense will be the fortresses of rocks; his food and water will be in steady supply.
+\q1 his place of defense will be the fortress among the cliffs, 
+\q1 his food will be given, and his water will be in steady supply.
 
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