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 \v 5 But one of the elders said to me, "Do not weep. Look! The Lion of the tribe of Judah, the Root of David, has conquered. He is able to open the scroll and its seven seals."
 
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-\v 6 I saw a Lamb standing in the middle of the throne and among the four living creatures and among the elders. He looked as though he had been killed. He had seven horns and seven eyes, which are the seven spirits of God sent out into all the earth.
+\v 6 I saw a Lamb standing in the middle of the throne area and among the four living creatures and among the elders. He looked as though he had been killed. He had seven horns and seven eyes, which are the seven spirits of God sent out into all the earth.
 \v 7 He went and took hold of the scroll out of the right hand of the one who was seated on the throne.
 
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-\v 11 Then I looked and heard the sound of many angels around the throne and the living creatures and the elders. Their total number was ten thousands of ten thousands and thousands of thousands.
+\v 11 Then I looked and heard the sound of many angels who encircled the throne and the living creatures and the elders. Their total number was ten thousands of ten thousands and thousands of thousands.
 \v 12 They said in a loud voice,
 \pi "Worthy is the Lamb who has been slaughtered to receive power, wealth, wisdom, strength, honor, glory, and praise."
 
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 \q2 The sun will not beat down on them,
 \q2 nor any burning heat.
 \q
-\v 17 For the Lamb in the middle of the throne will be their shepherd,
+\v 17 For the Lamb at the center of the throne will be their shepherd,
 \q2 and he will guide them to springs of living water,
 \q and God will wipe away every tear from their eyes."