From 7a770ee006d822117f36afd872d275e850632f44 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: hmw3 <henry_whitney@wycliffeassociates.org>
Date: Wed, 3 May 2017 17:14:18 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] sng 7

misc core
---
 22-SNG/07.usfm | 7 ++++---
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/22-SNG/07.usfm b/22-SNG/07.usfm
index 646b94ac..1475ad11 100644
--- a/22-SNG/07.usfm
+++ b/22-SNG/07.usfm
@@ -22,19 +22,20 @@
 
 \q
 \v 4 Your neck is like a tower of ivory;
-\q your eyes like the pools in Heshbon
+\q your eyes are the pools in Heshbon
 \q by the gate of Bath Rabbim.
 \q Your nose is like the tower in Lebanon
 \q that looks toward Damascus.
 
 \s5
 \q
-\v 5 Your head on you is like Carmel;
+\v 5 Your head is on you like Carmel;
 \q the hair on your head is dark purple.
 \q The king is held captive by its tresses.
 \q
 \v 6 How beautiful and lovely you are,
-\q beloved one, with your delights!
+\q love, with your delights!
+\f + \ft Some versions read \fqa loved one \fqa* . \f*
 
 \s5
 \q