diff --git a/22-SNG/07.usfm b/22-SNG/07.usfm index 646b94ac..1475ad11 100644 --- a/22-SNG/07.usfm +++ b/22-SNG/07.usfm @@ -22,19 +22,20 @@ \q \v 4 Your neck is like a tower of ivory; -\q your eyes like the pools in Heshbon +\q your eyes are the pools in Heshbon \q by the gate of Bath Rabbim. \q Your nose is like the tower in Lebanon \q that looks toward Damascus. \s5 \q -\v 5 Your head on you is like Carmel; +\v 5 Your head is on you like Carmel; \q the hair on your head is dark purple. \q The king is held captive by its tresses. \q \v 6 How beautiful and lovely you are, -\q beloved one, with your delights! +\q love, with your delights! +\f + \ft Some versions read \fqa loved one \fqa* . \f* \s5 \q