From 4f11acd978aa524eaa6130d9362855419eab38a2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: hmw3 <henry_whitney@wycliffeassociates.org>
Date: Wed, 28 Dec 2016 09:47:06 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Pro 25:11-12
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de-UDB’d v. 11, though I have allowed the reordered simile to stand and
have conformed v. 12 to it.
---
 20-PRO/25.usfm | 11 ++++++-----
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/20-PRO/25.usfm b/20-PRO/25.usfm
index 7452f2c7..a1fbdb4e 100644
--- a/20-PRO/25.usfm
+++ b/20-PRO/25.usfm
@@ -41,14 +41,15 @@
 \q
 \v 10 or else the one who hears you will bring shame upon you
 \q and an evil report about you that cannot be silenced.
+
 \s5
 \q
-\v 11 Speaking a well-chosen word,
-\q2 is like patterns of gold set in silver.
+\v 11 A word spoken at the right time
+\q2 is like apples of gold in settings of silver.
 \q
-\v 12 Like a gold ring or jewelry made of fine gold
-\q is a wise rebuke to a listening ear.
-
+\v 12 A wise rebuke to a listening ear
+\q is like a gold ring or jewelry made of fine gold.
+ 
 \s5
 \q
 \v 13 Like the cold of snow at harvest time