From 561ca56f05d9e9de5ae353cc5ed20370331d9160 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BramvandenHeuvel <Bramheuvelvd@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 24 May 2016 15:48:14 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] V7, 8 rewrite

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 42-MRK/03.usfm | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/42-MRK/03.usfm b/42-MRK/03.usfm
index 380883a6..8bf6f919 100644
--- a/42-MRK/03.usfm
+++ b/42-MRK/03.usfm
@@ -14,8 +14,8 @@
 
 \s5
 \p
-\v 7 Then Jesus went away with his disciples to the sea. And a great crowd of people followed from Galilee and Judea,
-\v 8 from Jerusalem, Idumea and beyond the Jordan, and around Tyre and Sidon. The great crowd heard all he was doing, and they came to him.
+\v 7 Then Jesus, with his disciples, went to the sea, and a great crowd of people followed from Galilee and from Judea
+\v 8 and from Jerusalem and from Idumea and beyond the Jordan and around Tyre and Sidon, a great crowd, when they heard everything he was doing, came to him.
 
 \s5
 \v 9 He said to his disciples to have a boat ready for him because the pressure of the crowd was so great, they might crush him.