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 * Rachel was the mother of Joseph and Benjamin, whose descendants became two of the tribes of Israel.
 * For many years, Rachel was not able to have any children. Then God enabled her to give birth to Joseph.
-* Years later, when she gave birth to Benjamin, Rachel died and Jacob buried her near Bethlehem.
+* Years later, as she gave birth to Benjamin, Rachel died, and Jacob buried her near Bethlehem.
 
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