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1ki/18/46.md

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 Here the word "hand" is a metonym for strength. Alternate translation: "Yahweh gave his power to Elijah" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])
 
-# tucked his robe in his belt
+# girded his loins
 
 Elijah wrapped his long robe around his waist so that his legs would be free for running.
 

1sa/14/06.md

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ a derogatory term used for non-Jewish men
 
 "work for our support" or "help us"
 
-# nothing can stop Yahweh from gaining victory
+# nothing can stop Yahweh from saving
 
 "Yahweh can gain victory" or "Yahweh can win the battle"
 

1sa/14/45.md

@@ -2,9 +2,13 @@
 
 The Army defends and protects Jonathan from Saul.
 
-# Should Jonathan die, who has accomplished this great victory for Israel? Far from it!
+# Should Jonathan die, who has accomplished this great salvation for Israel? Far from it!
 
-The people scold Saul. This rhetorical question can be translated as a statement. Alternate translation: "Jonathan has just accomplished this great victory for Israel. He should surely not die." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-rquestion]])
+The people scold Saul. This rhetorical question can be translated as a statement. Alternate translation: "Jonathan has just accomplished this great salvation for Israel. He should surely not die." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-rquestion]])
+
+# accomplished this great salvation
+
+This is a metonym for winning the victory that brought about the salvation. Alternate translation: "won this great victory" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])
 
 # As Yahweh lives
 

1sa/17/47.md

@@ -1,6 +1,10 @@
-# Yahweh does not give victory with sword or spear
+# Yahweh does not save with sword or spear
 
-Swords and spears are examples of battle weapons. They represent human ways of fighting. Alternate translation: "The victory that Yahweh gives does not depend on sword and spear" or "when Yahweh gives us victory, he does not depend on how we fight" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])
+"Yahweh can save his people without anyone's sword or spear" 
+
+# sword or spear
+
+These words are a synecdoche for any weapon used in battle. Alternate translation: "the weapons people use" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-synecdoche]])
 
 # the battle is Yahweh's
 

1sa/19/05.md

@@ -2,6 +2,10 @@
 
 Here "life in his hand" is an idiom that refers to risking his life. Alternate translation: "he risked his life" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-idiom]])
 
+# Yahweh brought about great salvation
+
+The words "brought about great salvation" is a metonym for allowing the Israelites to win the battle. Alternate translation: "Yahweh gave us a great victory" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])
+
 # Why would you sin against innocent blood by killing David for no reason?
 
 Jonathan asks this question to rebuke Saul. This rhetorical question can be translated as a statement. Alternate translation: "You should not sin against innocent blood and kill David without cause." (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-rquestion]])

2ch/26/10.md

@@ -6,3 +6,6 @@ Uzziah commanded his workers, and they did these things. Alternate translation:
 
 The word "he" refers to Uzziah.
 
+# the soil
+
+This phrase is a metonym for the activity of farming the soil. Alternate translation: "farming" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])