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-# conduct the time of your sojourn in fear
+# conduct yourselves in fear during your time here as foreigners.
 
-Christians living their lives on earth is spoken of as if they were living in a land far away from their homes. Alternate translation: "be reverent while you are living your life on earth" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
+Christians living their lives on earth is spoken of as if they were living in a land far away from their home. Alternate translation: "be reverent while you are living your life on earth" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])