From a57b89e4d1d1de30ac8504aa01d33066ea49d8f6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Henry Whitney <henry_whitney@wycliffeassociates.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:22:36 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 01/41] Deleted snippet portion pertaining to later notes page.

---
 rev/16/10.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/rev/16/10.md b/rev/16/10.md
index d37189a56b..d75c927d3e 100644
--- a/rev/16/10.md
+++ b/rev/16/10.md
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ This is where the beast reigns from. It may refer to the capital city of his kin
 
 Here "darkness" is spoken of as if it were something like a blanket. Alternate translation: "it became dark in all his kingdom" or "all of his kingdom became dark" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
 
-# They chewed ... They blasphemed
+# They chewed
 
-This refers to the people in the beast's kingdom.
+The people in the beast's kingdom chewed.
 

From 0a97f290145ccd98a863b6b5fc726dd1fcab1469 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Henry Whitney <henry_whitney@wycliffeassociates.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:23:11 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 02/41] Deleted snippet portion pertaining to earlier notes
 page.

---
 rev/16/11.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/rev/16/11.md b/rev/16/11.md
index 2dd8c748b4..01190fec3b 100644
--- a/rev/16/11.md
+++ b/rev/16/11.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-# They chewed ... They blasphemed
+# They blasphemed
 
-This refers to the people in the beast's kingdom.
+The people in the beast's kingdom blasphemed.
 

From a6679a494bbcf96462ec12516617115b07d3abd2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Henry Whitney <henry_whitney@wycliffeassociates.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:24:39 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 03/41] Deleted snippet portion pertaining to later notes page.

---
 rev/21/18.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/rev/21/18.md b/rev/21/18.md
index 43adcbf50f..7257539ddc 100644
--- a/rev/21/18.md
+++ b/rev/21/18.md
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "Someone had built the
 
 The gold was so clear that it is spoken of as if it were glass. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-simile]])
 
-# jasper ... emerald ... carnelian
+# jasper ... emerald
 
 These are valuable stones. Jasper may have been clear like glass or crystal, and carnelian may have been red. Emeralds are green. See how you translated these in [Revelation 4:3](../04/03.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-unknown]])
 

From 8da62bebbe685695ab389b43ee4c83e28a391415 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BobJ <bobj@noreply.door43.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:24:40 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 04/41] verse span snippet mismatch

---
 1ch/05/12.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/1ch/05/12.md b/1ch/05/12.md
index 995b87b21f..d57f2c12ce 100644
--- a/1ch/05/12.md
+++ b/1ch/05/12.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-# Joel ... Shapham ... Janai ... Shaphat ... Michael ... Meshullam ... Sheba ... Jorai ... Jakan ... Zia ... Eber
+# Joel ... Shapham ... Janai ... Shaphat
 
-These are the names of men.
+These are names of men.
 

From f6fc8bff99e815a099a31657d3010a199e3b41b2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BobJ <bobj@noreply.door43.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:25:11 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 05/41] verse span snippet mismatch

---
 1ch/05/13.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/1ch/05/13.md b/1ch/05/13.md
index 995b87b21f..0fd5611ad3 100644
--- a/1ch/05/13.md
+++ b/1ch/05/13.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-# Joel ... Shapham ... Janai ... Shaphat ... Michael ... Meshullam ... Sheba ... Jorai ... Jakan ... Zia ... Eber
+# Michael ... Meshullam ... Sheba ... Jorai ... Jakan ... Zia ... Eber
 
-These are the names of men.
+These are names of men.
 

From bd7b30b679769cf9b321c3d10a29eef4d2c7873c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Henry Whitney <henry_whitney@wycliffeassociates.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:25:53 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 06/41] Update 'rev/21/18.md'

---
 rev/21/18.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/rev/21/18.md b/rev/21/18.md
index 7257539ddc..ac5783257b 100644
--- a/rev/21/18.md
+++ b/rev/21/18.md
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "Someone had built the
 
 The gold was so clear that it is spoken of as if it were glass. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-simile]])
 
-# jasper ... emerald
+# jasper
 
-These are valuable stones. Jasper may have been clear like glass or crystal, and carnelian may have been red. Emeralds are green. See how you translated these in [Revelation 4:3](../04/03.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-unknown]])
+This is a valuable stone. Jasper may have been clear like glass or crystal. See how you translated this in [Revelation 4:3](../04/03.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-unknown]])
 

From 153863ee14678d5c80943e2759c5824d84629dc2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BobJ <bobj@noreply.door43.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:27:19 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 07/41] verse span snippet mismatch

---
 1ch/05/15.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/1ch/05/15.md b/1ch/05/15.md
index af626dec47..6816657cbe 100644
--- a/1ch/05/15.md
+++ b/1ch/05/15.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-# Abihail ... Huri ... Jaroah ... Gilead ... Michael ... Jeshishai ... Jahdo ... Buz ... Ahi ... Abdiel ... Guni
+# Ahi ... Abdiel ... Guni
 
-These are the names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
+These are names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 

From d3f955ec5bb20f50f493c3baa564e47c47991f2d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BobJ <bobj@noreply.door43.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:27:49 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 08/41] verse span snippet mismatch

---
 1ch/05/14.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/1ch/05/14.md b/1ch/05/14.md
index af626dec47..37c9d9aae7 100644
--- a/1ch/05/14.md
+++ b/1ch/05/14.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-# Abihail ... Huri ... Jaroah ... Gilead ... Michael ... Jeshishai ... Jahdo ... Buz ... Ahi ... Abdiel ... Guni
+# Abihail ... Huri ... Jaroah ... Gilead ... Michael ... Jeshishai ... Jahdo ... Buz
 
-These are the names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
+These are names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 

From 68bc260a9e2bd54ffe6a1471c1923a98239a9d72 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Henry Whitney <henry_whitney@wycliffeassociates.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:28:21 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 09/41] Deleted snippet portion pertaining to later notes page.

---
 rev/21/19.md | 8 ++------
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/rev/21/19.md b/rev/21/19.md
index b93f5b897d..184629c7bb 100644
--- a/rev/21/19.md
+++ b/rev/21/19.md
@@ -2,11 +2,7 @@
 
 This can be stated in active form. Alternate translation: "Someone adorned the foundations of the wall" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
 
-# jasper ... emerald ... carnelian
+# jasper ... sapphire ... agate ... emerald
 
-These are valuable stones. Jasper may have been clear like glass or crystal, and carnelian may have been red. Emeralds are green. See how you translated these in [Revelation 4:3](../04/03.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-unknown]])
-
-# sapphire ... agate ... onyx ... chrysolite ... beryl ... topaz ... chrysoprase ... jacinth ... amethyst
-
-These are all precious gems. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-unknown]])
+These are valuable stones. Jasper may have been clear like glass or crystal. See how you translated it in [Revelation 4:3](../04/03.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-unknown]])
 

From 53b202960c5361adf6cae308b3f72f54620987d9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Henry Whitney <henry_whitney@wycliffeassociates.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:28:54 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 10/41] Deleted snippet portion pertaining to earlier notes
 page.

---
 rev/21/20.md | 6 +-----
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/rev/21/20.md b/rev/21/20.md
index 1d4c592d56..6b0062c52d 100644
--- a/rev/21/20.md
+++ b/rev/21/20.md
@@ -1,8 +1,4 @@
-# jasper ... emerald ... carnelian
-
-These are valuable stones. Jasper may have been clear like glass or crystal, and carnelian may have been red. Emeralds are green. See how you translated these in [Revelation 4:3](../04/03.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-unknown]])
-
-# sapphire ... agate ... onyx ... chrysolite ... beryl ... topaz ... chrysoprase ... jacinth ... amethyst
+# onyx ... chrysolite ... beryl ... topaz ... chrysoprase ... jacinth ... amethyst
 
 These are all precious gems. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-unknown]])
 

From 32222539dfc22e909ad1442eac2d794d087ae6d6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Henry Whitney <henry_whitney@wycliffeassociates.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:30:11 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 11/41] Update 'rev/22/18.md'

---
 rev/22/18.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/rev/22/18.md b/rev/22/18.md
index 34b32b1436..5f5fffcc0d 100644
--- a/rev/22/18.md
+++ b/rev/22/18.md
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ Here "I" refers to John.
 
 Here "words" refers to the message that they formed. See how you translated this in [Revelation 22:7](./07.md). Alternate translation: "This prophetic message of this book" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
 
-# If anyone adds to them ... If anyone takes away
+# If anyone adds to them ... God will add
 
 This is a strong warning to not change anything about this prophecy.
 

From 229b445554ec66356f81e4c51316d09aa2e64f48 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Henry Whitney <henry_whitney@wycliffeassociates.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:30:34 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 12/41] Update 'rev/22/19.md'

---
 rev/22/19.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/rev/22/19.md b/rev/22/19.md
index afcb9ab70a..660a6844ed 100644
--- a/rev/22/19.md
+++ b/rev/22/19.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-# If anyone adds to them ... If anyone takes away
+# If anyone takes away ... God will take away
 
 This is a strong warning to not change anything about this prophecy.
 

From c828a9e3be6dbb23874ee06f9fc64744558b1a06 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Henry Whitney <henry_whitney@wycliffeassociates.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:38:11 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 13/41] Adjusted references to parts of the book needed because
 of de-chunking.

---
 psa/017/014.md | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/psa/017/014.md b/psa/017/014.md
index 12ba141bb8..fb42dda3c3 100644
--- a/psa/017/014.md
+++ b/psa/017/014.md
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
-# Rescue my life from the wicked by your sword ... Rescue me from men by your hand, Yahweh, from men of this world
+# Rescue me from men by your hand, Yahweh, from men of this world
 
-These two clauses have similar meanings. The repetition adds intensity to the writer's words. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]])
+This clause adds intensity to the words "Rescue my life from the wicked by your sword" ([Psalms 17:13](./013.md)). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]])
 
-# by your sword ... by your hand
+# by your hand
 
-Here "sword" and "hand" both represent the power of Yahweh. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
+These words represent the power of Yahweh and add intensity to the words "by your sword" ([Psalms 17:13](./013.md)). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
 
 # You will fill the bellies of your treasured ones with riches
 

From 5ccfd9665966aa8b8a1a45e500e5da169472f509 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BobJ <bobj@noreply.door43.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:45:24 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 14/41] verse span snippet mismatch

---
 1ch/04/12.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/1ch/04/12.md b/1ch/04/12.md
index 43c65ffc91..c0732c12af 100644
--- a/1ch/04/12.md
+++ b/1ch/04/12.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-# Kelub ... Shuhah ... Mehir ... Eshton ... Beth Rapha ... Paseah ... Tehinnah
+# Eshton ... Beth Rapha ... Paseah ... Tehinnah
 
-These are the names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
+These are names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 
 # Tehinnah, the father of Ir Nahash
 

From a6f4770544320bf85a87ec6bb7d6a2b350c933ba Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BobJ <bobj@noreply.door43.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:45:57 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 15/41] verse span snippet mismatch

---
 1ch/04/11.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/1ch/04/11.md b/1ch/04/11.md
index 7ff79fdaa4..2e14b65220 100644
--- a/1ch/04/11.md
+++ b/1ch/04/11.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-# Kelub ... Shuhah ... Mehir ... Eshton ... Beth Rapha ... Paseah ... Tehinnah
+# Kelub ... Shuhah ... Mehir ... Eshton
 
 These are the names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 

From dcf22045bbf12febe6f070696235a71687f53a7c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Henry Whitney <henry_whitney@wycliffeassociates.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:46:00 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 16/41] Deleted snippets pertaining to later notes page.

---
 psa/017/013.md | 10 ++--------
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/psa/017/013.md b/psa/017/013.md
index b26f77e886..6028815794 100644
--- a/psa/017/013.md
+++ b/psa/017/013.md
@@ -1,8 +1,2 @@
-# Rescue my life from the wicked by your sword ... Rescue me from men by your hand, Yahweh, from men of this world
-
-These two clauses have similar meanings. The repetition adds intensity to the writer's words. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]])
-
-# by your sword ... by your hand
-
-Here "sword" and "hand" both represent the power of Yahweh. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
-
+# by your sword
+This is a metaphor for Yahweh's power and for violent death in war. Alternate translation: "by having them die in war" or "by killing them in battle" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
\ No newline at end of file

From d7edc630d189dfdf258bfee8fe3c944c6c81c86a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BobJ <bobj@noreply.door43.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:47:02 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 17/41] verse span snippet mismatch

---
 1ch/04/11.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/1ch/04/11.md b/1ch/04/11.md
index 2e14b65220..9cdf326c21 100644
--- a/1ch/04/11.md
+++ b/1ch/04/11.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
 # Kelub ... Shuhah ... Mehir ... Eshton
 
-These are the names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
+These are names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 

From df365cf9829debe060189dccdc9f45f47ed3daa5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BobJ <bobj@noreply.door43.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:48:59 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 18/41] verse span snippet mismatch

---
 1ch/04/13.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/1ch/04/13.md b/1ch/04/13.md
index 56fcd449bf..73848ae778 100644
--- a/1ch/04/13.md
+++ b/1ch/04/13.md
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 It may be helpful to create a verse bridge and to put verse 15 together with verse 13 since Kenaz was a descendant of Jephunneh and Caleb. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-versebridge]])
 
-# Kenaz ... Othniel ... Seraiah ... Hathath ... Meonothai ... Ophrah ... Joab ... Jephunneh ... Iru ... Elah ... Naam ... Jehallelel ... Ziph ... Ziphah ... Tiria ... Asarel
+# Kenaz ... Othniel ... Seraiah ... Hathath ... Meonothai
 
-These are the names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
+These are names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 

From 8db3f77aa6637b6ae2b0e395182b7bdca67f547d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BobJ <bobj@noreply.door43.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:51:00 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 19/41] verse span snippet mismatch

---
 1ch/04/14.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/1ch/04/14.md b/1ch/04/14.md
index 13fa8dc49c..d6230fb3e8 100644
--- a/1ch/04/14.md
+++ b/1ch/04/14.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-# Kenaz ... Othniel ... Seraiah ... Hathath ... Meonothai ... Ophrah ... Joab ... Jephunneh ... Iru ... Elah ... Naam ... Jehallelel ... Ziph ... Ziphah ... Tiria ... Asarel
+# Meonothai ... Ophrah ... Joab
 
-These are the names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
+These are names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 
 # Ge-Harashim, whose people were craftsmen
 

From 1aec3121e7cf3026ec165091b9d1d93308a16bd0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Susan Quigley <susan_quigley@wycliffeassociates.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:53:26 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 20/41] Changed At: to Alternate translation

---
 2ki/13/13.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/2ki/13/13.md b/2ki/13/13.md
index e92d1b157a..e63d4db36f 100644
--- a/2ki/13/13.md
+++ b/2ki/13/13.md
@@ -4,5 +4,5 @@ This a polite way to say that Jehoash died. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/fig
 
 # Jeroboam sat on his throne
 
-Here "sat on his throne" refers to ruling as king. At: "Jeroboam became king after him" or "Jeroboam began to rule after him" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
+Here "sat on his throne" refers to ruling as king. Alternate translation: "Jeroboam became king after him" or "Jeroboam began to rule after him" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
 

From 06e511646b0f1e6c1eed46eed20170c77238ea1f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Henry Whitney <henry_whitney@wycliffeassociates.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:54:15 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 21/41] Deleted snippet pertaining to later notes page.

---
 psa/018/025.md | 4 ----
 1 file changed, 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/psa/018/025.md b/psa/018/025.md
index 687f24d29b..03a3fd4e2c 100644
--- a/psa/018/025.md
+++ b/psa/018/025.md
@@ -6,7 +6,3 @@ The writer speaks to Yahweh.
 
 Here "faithful" means to do what God commands one to do. You can state this clearly. Alternate translation: "to those who faithfully obey your commandments" or "to those who faithfully do your covenant" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
 
-# to a man who is blameless ... you show yourself pure
-
-Both of these clauses have similar meanings. The writer repeats these ideas for emphasis. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]])
-

From 27069121c1b0ff3d521fdcb90b6f3c8a1d0f0288 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BobJ <bobj@noreply.door43.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:54:30 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 22/41] verse span snippet mismatch

---
 1ch/04/15.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/1ch/04/15.md b/1ch/04/15.md
index 143c69687e..645b7cae4a 100644
--- a/1ch/04/15.md
+++ b/1ch/04/15.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-# Kenaz ... Othniel ... Seraiah ... Hathath ... Meonothai ... Ophrah ... Joab ... Jephunneh ... Iru ... Elah ... Naam ... Jehallelel ... Ziph ... Ziphah ... Tiria ... Asarel
+# Jephunneh ... Iru ... Elah ... Naam ... Kenaz
 
-These are the names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
+These are names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 

From 63ba218d6607d504963d5ed503f21094768c2699 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Susan Quigley <susan_quigley@wycliffeassociates.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:54:54 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 23/41] Changed At: to Alternate translation

---
 job/15/33.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/job/15/33.md b/job/15/33.md
index 5318548006..7dcd7fa70d 100644
--- a/job/15/33.md
+++ b/job/15/33.md
@@ -8,5 +8,5 @@ This speaks of the wicked man growing weak and dying as if he were a grapevine d
 
 # he will cast off his flowers like the olive tree
 
-This speaks of the wicked man growing weak and dying as if he were were an olive tree dropping its flowers. At: "just like an olive tree loses its flowers, so the wicked man will lose his strength" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
+This speaks of the wicked man growing weak and dying as if he were were an olive tree dropping its flowers. Alternate translation: "just like an olive tree loses its flowers, so the wicked man will lose his strength" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
 

From 335ec14e6e2527b805e5b00db5ece2af330692fe Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Henry Whitney <henry_whitney@wycliffeassociates.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:55:03 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 24/41] Deleted snippet pertaining to earlier notes page.

---
 psa/018/026.md | 4 ----
 1 file changed, 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/psa/018/026.md b/psa/018/026.md
index 009b284726..2e26b7a4f4 100644
--- a/psa/018/026.md
+++ b/psa/018/026.md
@@ -1,7 +1,3 @@
-# to a man who is blameless ... you show yourself pure
-
-Both of these clauses have similar meanings. The writer repeats these ideas for emphasis. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]])
-
 # you are clever toward anyone who is twisted
 
 "you outwit anyone who is not honest"

From 939aa2cee768173da47c021a53bd995270ce5b6f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BobJ <bobj@noreply.door43.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:55:05 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 25/41] verse span snippet mismatch

---
 1ch/04/16.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/1ch/04/16.md b/1ch/04/16.md
index 143c69687e..b71af7b557 100644
--- a/1ch/04/16.md
+++ b/1ch/04/16.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-# Kenaz ... Othniel ... Seraiah ... Hathath ... Meonothai ... Ophrah ... Joab ... Jephunneh ... Iru ... Elah ... Naam ... Jehallelel ... Ziph ... Ziphah ... Tiria ... Asarel
+# Jehallelel ... Ziph ... Ziphah ... Tiria ... Asarel
 
-These are the names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
+These are names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 

From c107a0422b90d3dba03fc487c2482e53e5ce5511 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Susan Quigley <susan_quigley@wycliffeassociates.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:56:36 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 26/41] Changed At: to Alternate Translation

---
 oba/01/20.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/oba/01/20.md b/oba/01/20.md
index fec26b7dc4..23050e8f74 100644
--- a/oba/01/20.md
+++ b/oba/01/20.md
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ a very large group of people
 
 # as far as Zarephath
 
-Zarephath was a Phoenician city north of Israel on the coast of the Mediterranean between Tyre and Sidon. At: "as far north as Zarephath" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
+Zarephath was a Phoenician city north of Israel on the coast of the Mediterranean between Tyre and Sidon. Alternate Translation: "as far north as Zarephath" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 
 # The exiles of Jerusalem
 

From 44c087759d67b1233ad4f4211be7895a9fd6a308 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Susan Quigley <susan_quigley@wycliffeassociates.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:57:54 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 27/41] Changed Alternate Translation to Alternate translation

---
 oba/01/20.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/oba/01/20.md b/oba/01/20.md
index 23050e8f74..7f5f0a1793 100644
--- a/oba/01/20.md
+++ b/oba/01/20.md
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ a very large group of people
 
 # as far as Zarephath
 
-Zarephath was a Phoenician city north of Israel on the coast of the Mediterranean between Tyre and Sidon. Alternate Translation: "as far north as Zarephath" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
+Zarephath was a Phoenician city north of Israel on the coast of the Mediterranean between Tyre and Sidon. Alternate translation: "as far north as Zarephath" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 
 # The exiles of Jerusalem
 

From 0bd1b74808d1623b1e8cf9a5be362d3bab97c6d4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Susan Quigley <susan_quigley@wycliffeassociates.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 20:59:06 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 28/41] Changed At: to Alternate translation

---
 psa/005/011.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/psa/005/011.md b/psa/005/011.md
index 8131cf9fe9..5705a344da 100644
--- a/psa/005/011.md
+++ b/psa/005/011.md
@@ -12,5 +12,5 @@ Going to Yahweh for protection is spoken of as taking refuge in him. Alternate t
 
 # those who love your name
 
-God's name represents him. At: "those who love you" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
+God's name represents him. Alternate translation: "those who love you" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
 

From 93e39d8251bb2fcd60c2b3ec144635e40faec6d2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BobJ <bobj@noreply.door43.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 21:00:40 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 29/41] verse span snippet mismatch

---
 1ch/04/19.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/1ch/04/19.md b/1ch/04/19.md
index a99b577127..888c1d541a 100644
--- a/1ch/04/19.md
+++ b/1ch/04/19.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-# Hodiah ... Naham ... Keilah ... Eshtemoa ... Shimon ... Amnon ... Rinnah ... Ben-Hanan ... Tilon ... Ishi ... Zoheth ... Ben-Zoheth
+# Hodiah ... Naham ... Keilah ... Eshtemoa
 
-These are the names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
+These are names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 
 # Garmite
 

From 67691c1a0aa0a9172c2bd7ac60f2d24e3c269530 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BobJ <bobj@noreply.door43.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 21:01:27 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 30/41] verse span snippet mismatch

---
 1ch/04/20.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/1ch/04/20.md b/1ch/04/20.md
index 702b2df526..462cd09d02 100644
--- a/1ch/04/20.md
+++ b/1ch/04/20.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-# Hodiah ... Naham ... Keilah ... Eshtemoa ... Shimon ... Amnon ... Rinnah ... Ben-Hanan ... Tilon ... Ishi ... Zoheth ... Ben-Zoheth
+# Shimon ... Amnon ... Rinnah ... Ben-Hanan ... Tilon ... Ishi ... Zoheth ... Ben-Zoheth
 
-These are the names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
+These are names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 

From 2d61e3dedac547413e7abfc3c8dd52a070db5be9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BobJ <bobj@noreply.door43.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 21:03:24 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 31/41] verse span snippet mismatch

---
 1ch/04/21.md | 12 ++++++------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/1ch/04/21.md b/1ch/04/21.md
index ea5744356d..0c58d2087b 100644
--- a/1ch/04/21.md
+++ b/1ch/04/21.md
@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
-# Shelah ... Er ... Laadah ... Jokim ... Joash ... Saraph
+# Shelah ... Er ... Laadah
 
-These are the names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
+These are names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
+
+# Lekah ... Mareshah ... Beth Ashbea
+
+These are names of towns. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 
 # linen workers
 
 people who made clothing out of a fabric made from crushed reeds (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-unknown]])
 
-# Lekah ... Mareshah ... Beth Ashbea ... Kozeba ... Jashubi Lehem ... Netaim ... Gederah
-
-These are the names of towns. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
-

From 54f0753edd16940a2c4cb16321cb19e8a5c80f33 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BobJ <bobj@noreply.door43.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 21:04:25 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 32/41] verse span snippet mismatch

---
 1ch/04/22.md | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/1ch/04/22.md b/1ch/04/22.md
index bf3bb6825b..4498cb2615 100644
--- a/1ch/04/22.md
+++ b/1ch/04/22.md
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
-# Shelah ... Er ... Laadah ... Jokim ... Joash ... Saraph
+# Jokim ... Joash ... Saraph
 
-These are the names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
+These are names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 
-# Lekah ... Mareshah ... Beth Ashbea ... Kozeba ... Jashubi Lehem ... Netaim ... Gederah
+# Lekah ... Mareshah ... Beth Ashbea ... Kozeba ... Jashubi Lehem
 
-These are the names of towns. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
+These are names of towns. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 

From 71e21a2843b883775ccd0eade749964a9afb0ad1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BobJ <bobj@noreply.door43.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 21:05:05 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 33/41] verse span snippet mismatch

---
 1ch/04/23.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/1ch/04/23.md b/1ch/04/23.md
index cd399bec66..9efdf0eacb 100644
--- a/1ch/04/23.md
+++ b/1ch/04/23.md
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 the people who make containers out of clay
 
-# Lekah ... Mareshah ... Beth Ashbea ... Kozeba ... Jashubi Lehem ... Netaim ... Gederah
+# Netaim ... Gederah
 
-These are the names of towns. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
+These are names of towns. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 

From ce0be6ee228261991c312272935f26e373e4b65b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BobJ <bobj@noreply.door43.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 21:06:41 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 34/41] verse span snippet mismatch

---
 1ch/04/24.md | 5 ++---
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/1ch/04/24.md b/1ch/04/24.md
index 7fdb62d617..afd644bf05 100644
--- a/1ch/04/24.md
+++ b/1ch/04/24.md
@@ -1,4 +1,3 @@
-# Nemuel ... Jamin ... Jarib ... Zerah ... Shaul ... Shallum ... Mibsam ... Mishma ... Hammuel ... Zakkur ... Shimei
-
-These are the names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
+# Nemuel ... Jamin ... Jarib ... Zerah ... Shaul
+These are names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 

From 52aa015ac7cdd890b1fe2eefc43ac1e32be39939 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BobJ <bobj@noreply.door43.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 21:07:30 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 35/41] verse span snippet mismatch

---
 1ch/04/25.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/1ch/04/25.md b/1ch/04/25.md
index 7fdb62d617..ab2951ffab 100644
--- a/1ch/04/25.md
+++ b/1ch/04/25.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-# Nemuel ... Jamin ... Jarib ... Zerah ... Shaul ... Shallum ... Mibsam ... Mishma ... Hammuel ... Zakkur ... Shimei
+# Shallum ... Mibsam ... Mishma
 
-These are the names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
+These are names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 

From f39ef70c3ecfe73b6e1e01aad84c9ffbd8568851 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: BobJ <bobj@noreply.door43.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 21:08:26 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 36/41] verse span snippet mismatch

---
 1ch/04/26.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/1ch/04/26.md b/1ch/04/26.md
index e69618e00c..909f8fb522 100644
--- a/1ch/04/26.md
+++ b/1ch/04/26.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-# Nemuel ... Jamin ... Jarib ... Zerah ... Shaul ... Shallum ... Mibsam ... Mishma ... Hammuel ... Zakkur ... Shimei
+# Mishma ... Hammuel ... Zakkur ... Shimei
 
-These are the names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
+These are names of men. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 
 # Zakkur his grandson
 

From be5b5cbb1ae23b778e5a0b02e8f86de587570e5c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Henry Whitney <henry_whitney@wycliffeassociates.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 21:14:18 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 37/41] Tweaked for this verse

---
 psa/019/007.md | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/psa/019/007.md b/psa/019/007.md
index 4343cc148a..7dc37c73f9 100644
--- a/psa/019/007.md
+++ b/psa/019/007.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-# the soul ... the heart ... the eyes
+# restoring the soul
 
-All three of these words refer to the whole person. Alternate translation: "a person" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-synecdoche]])
+The words "the soul" refer to the whole person. Alternate translation: "making a person strong again" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-synecdoche]])
 
 # the simple
 

From 4dcfe558c1c7c6d94f5f939f7ba2686a6ae091d8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Henry Whitney <henry_whitney@wycliffeassociates.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 21:17:21 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 38/41] Update 'psa/019/008.md'

---
 psa/019/008.md | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/psa/019/008.md b/psa/019/008.md
index 3333d517b9..4368569f56 100644
--- a/psa/019/008.md
+++ b/psa/019/008.md
@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
-# the soul ... the heart ... the eyes
+# the heart
 
-All three of these words refer to the whole person. Alternate translation: "a person" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-synecdoche]])
+These words refer to the whole person. Alternate translation: "a person" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-synecdoche]])
 
 # are right
 
 "are true" or "are correct"
 
-# bringing light
+# bringing light to the eyes
 
-"bringing understanding"
+Possible meanings are 1) "bringing understanding to a person" or 2) "making a person healthy again"
 

From b297900013ab2a1fdb8d279275f1eb5ef84f37b8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Henry Whitney <henry_whitney@wycliffeassociates.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 21:18:27 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 39/41] Update 'psa/020/001.md'

---
 psa/020/001.md | 3 +--
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/psa/020/001.md b/psa/020/001.md
index 0c77ab67e1..554e7209f0 100644
--- a/psa/020/001.md
+++ b/psa/020/001.md
@@ -1,7 +1,6 @@
 # General Information:
 
-This Psalm begins with a group of people speaking to the king of Israel.
-Parallelism is common in Hebrew poetry. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-poetry]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]])
+This Psalm begins with a group of people speaking to the king of Israel. Parallelism is common in Hebrew poetry. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/writing-poetry]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-parallelism]])
 
 # For the chief musician
 

From 3999460922f83ee9abae7dfa4b5c59baec993844 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Henry Whitney <henry_whitney@wycliffeassociates.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 21:20:10 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 40/41] Deleted snippet portion pertaining to later notes page.

---
 psa/020/007.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/psa/020/007.md b/psa/020/007.md
index 6c38137c51..2c9d9f833e 100644
--- a/psa/020/007.md
+++ b/psa/020/007.md
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ Here "chariots" and "horses" represent a king's army. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/tra
 
 The word "trust" is understood. Alternate translation: "other trust in horses" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-ellipsis]])
 
-# we call ... we will rise
+# we call
 
 Here "we" refers to the writer and the readers. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-inclusive]])
 

From 1074726869ead812020a2d0ab43ee04bf3775c47 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Henry Whitney <henry_whitney@wycliffeassociates.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Feb 2018 21:20:21 +0000
Subject: [PATCH 41/41] Deleted snippet portion pertaining to earlier notes
 page.

---
 psa/020/008.md | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/psa/020/008.md b/psa/020/008.md
index 66ab7f8fb7..99272c1c81 100644
--- a/psa/020/008.md
+++ b/psa/020/008.md
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-# we call ... we will rise
+# we will rise
 
 Here "we" refers to the writer and the readers. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-inclusive]])