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Reworded "delivered" note

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@ -16,15 +16,11 @@ These two phrases refer to the same thing. They are repeated to show the serious
# that we, having been delivered out of the hand of our enemies, would serve him without fear
It may be helpful to change the order of these phrases. AT: "that we would serve him without fear after we have rescued from the hand of our enemies"
# having been delivered
"having been rescued"
This can be stated in active form. AT: "that we would serve him without fear after he rescued us from the hand of our enemies" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-activepassive]])
# out of the hand of our enemies
"hand" refers to the control or power a person. This could be stated clearly. AT: "from the control of our enemies" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
Here "hand" refers to the control or power a person. This could be stated clearly. AT: "from the control of our enemies" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
# without fear