From work for interleaved PDF

rev/02/27.md

@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
-# He will shepherd ... break them into pieces
+# He will rule ... break them into pieces
 
 This is a prophecy from the Old Testament about a king of Israel, but Jesus applies it here to those to whom he gives authority over the nations.
 
-# He will shepherd them with an iron rod
+# He will rule them with an iron rod
 
 Ruling harshly is spoken of as ruling with an iron rod. Alternate translation: "He will rule them harshly as if striking them with an iron stick" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
 

rev/07/17.md

@@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ These words refer to those people who have come through the great tribulation.
 
 "the Lamb, who is standing in the middle of the area around the throne, will be"
 
-# For the Lamb ... will be their shepherd
+# For the Lamb ... will shepherd them
 
-The elder speaks of the Lamb's care for his people as if it were a shepherd's care for his sheep. Alternate translation: "For the Lamb ... will be like a shepherd to them" or "For the Lamb ... will care for them as a shepherd cares for his sheep" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
+The elder speaks of the Lamb's care for his people as if it were a shepherd's care for his sheep. Alternate translation: "For the Lamb ... will be like a shepherd to them" or "For the Lamb ... will care for them as a person cares for his animals" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
 
 # he will guide them to springs of living water
 

rev/11/06.md

@@ -2,6 +2,10 @@
 
 John speaks of the sky as if it had a door that can be opened to let rain fall or closed to stop the rain. Alternate translation: "to keep rain from falling from the sky" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
 
+# the days that they prophesy
+
+"the time that they prophesy." The word "days" here can refer to weeks, months, or years.
+
 # to turn
 
 "to change"

rev/12/15.md

@@ -2,10 +2,14 @@
 
 This is the same being as the dragon mentioned earlier in [Revelation 12:9](../12/09.md).
 
-# poured water out of his mouth like a river, that
+# poured water out of his mouth like a river so that
 
 The water flowed from his mouth like a river flows. Alternate translation: "poured a very large amount of water out of his mouth so that" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-simile]])
 
+# river so that he might make a flood to sweep
+
+"river; he was trying to make a flood that would sweep"
+
 # to sweep her away
 
 "to wash her away"

rev/19/15.md

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ The sword blade was sticking out of his mouth. The sword itself was not in motio
 
 # rule them with an iron rod
 
-John speaks of the rider's power as if he were ruling with an iron rod. See how you translated this in [Revelation 12:5](../12/05.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
+John speaks of the rider's power as if he were ruling with an iron rod. See how you translated this in [Revelation 2:27](../02/27.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metaphor]])
 
 # He tramples in the winepress of the fury of the wrath of God Almighty