From Forest Dean

from Larry Sallee

67-REV/07.usfm

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 \v 13 Then one of the elders asked me, "Who are these, clothed with white robes, and where did they come from?"
-\v 14 I said to him, "Sir, you know," and he said to me, "These are the ones who have come out of the Great Tribulation. They have washed their robes and made them white in the blood of the Lamb.
+\v 14 I said to him, "Sir, you know," and he said to me, "These are the ones who have come out of the great tribulation. They have washed their robes and made them white in the blood of the Lamb.
 
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67-REV/10.usfm

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 \v 1 Then I saw another mighty angel coming down from heaven. He was robed in a cloud, and there was a rainbow above his head. His face was like the sun and his feet were like pillars of fire.
-\v 2 He held a little scroll in his hand that was open, and he put his right foot on the sea and his left foot on the land.
+\v 2 He held a little scroll, which was opened in his hand. He put his right foot on the sea and his left foot on the land.
 
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 \v 3 Then he shouted in a loud voice like a roaring lion. When he shouted, the seven thunders spoke out with their sounds.
 \v 4 When the seven thunders spoke out, I was about to write, but I heard a voice from heaven saying, "Keep secret what the seven thunders said. Do not write it down."
 
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-\v 5 Then the angel I saw standing on the sea and the earth, raised his right hand to heaven.
+\v 5 Then the angel I saw standing on the sea and the earth raised his right hand to heaven.
 \v 6 He swore by the one who lives forever and ever, who created heaven and all that is in it, the earth and all that is on it, and the sea and all that is in it, and the angel said, "There will be no more delay.
 \v 7 But on the day when the seventh angel is about to sound his trumpet, then the mystery of God will be accomplished, just as he proclaimed to his servants the prophets."
 

67-REV/11.usfm

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-\v 16 Then the twenty-four elders who were sitting on their thrones in the presence of God prostrated themselves on their faces. They worshiped God.
+\v 16 Then the twenty-four elders, who sit on their thrones in the presence of God, prostrated themselves on their faces and worshiped God.
 \v 17 They said,
 \q "We give thanks to you, Lord God Almighty, the one who is and who was,
 \q because you have taken your great power and have begun to reign.

67-REV/12.usfm

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 \v 11 They conquered him by the blood of the Lamb and by the word of their testimony,
 \q for they did not love their lives even to death.
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-\v 12 Therefore, rejoice, you heavens,
-\q2 and all who reside in them.
-\q But woe to the earth and to the sea
-\q2 because the devil has gone down to you.
-\q He is filled with terrible anger,
-\q2 because he knows he only has a little time.
+\v 12 Therefore rejoice you heavens,
+\q2 and all who reside in them!
+\q But woe to the earth and to the sea,
+\q2 because the devil has gone down to you!
+\q He is filled with terrible anger
+\q2 because he has only a little time!
 
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