From Aaron Fenlason suggestions

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 \v 10 Your mother was like a vine planted in your blood beside the water.
 \f + \ft Instead of \fqa in your blood \fqa* , some ancient copies and many modern versions have \fqa in your vineyard \fqa* . \f*
-\q she was fruitful and full of branches because of the abundance of water.
+\q it was fruitful and full of branches because of the abundance of water.
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-\v 11 She had strong branches for rulers' scepters,
+\v 11 It had strong branches that were used for rulers' scepters,
-\q and her heights were exalted among the branches of the thicket.
+\q and its size was exalted above the branches,
+\q and its height was seen by the greatness of its foliage.
 
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-\v 12 But the vine was uprooted in fury and thrown down to the earth, and an eastern wind dried out her fruit.
+\v 12 But the vine was uprooted in fury and thrown down to the earth, and an eastern wind dried out its fruit.
-\q her strong branches were broken off and withered; fire consumed them.
+\q Its strong branches were broken off and withered and fire consumed them.
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-\v 13 So now she is planted in the wilderness, in a land of drought and thirst.
+\v 13 So now it is planted in the wilderness, in a land of drought and thirst.
 
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-\v 14 For fire went out from her large branches and consumed her fruit.
+\v 14 For fire went out from her large branches and consumed its fruit.
-\q There is no strong branch on her, no scepter to rule.' This is a lamentation and will be sung as a lamentation."
+\q There is no strong branch on it, no scepter to rule.' This is a lamentation and will be sung as a lamentation."
 
 

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 \v 14 But I acted for my name's sake so it would not be profaned in the eyes of the nations, in whose sight I had brought them out of Egypt.
 
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-\v 15 So I myself also raised my hand to swear an oath to them in the wilderness not to bring them into the land that I had been going to give them, a land flowing with milk and honey. which was the most beautiful ornament among all the lands.
+\v 15 So I myself also raised my hand to swear an oath to them in the wilderness not to bring them into the land that I had been going to give them, a land flowing with milk and honey, which was the most beautiful ornament among all the lands.
 \v 16 I swore this because they had rejected my decrees and did not walk in my statutes, and they profaned my Sabbaths, since their hearts walked after their idols.
-\v 17 But my eye had compassion for them because of their destruction, so I did not annihilate them in the wilderness.
+\v 17 But my eye spared them from their destruction and I did not annihilate them in the wilderness.
 
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 \v 30 Therefore say to the house of Israel, 'The Lord Yahweh says this: Why do you make yourselves unclean with the ways of your fathers? So why do you act like prostitutes, searching for disgusting things?
-\v 31 For when you offer up your gifts and you put your sons into the fire, and to this day you make yourselves unclean with all your idols. So why should I let you question me, house of Israel? As I live—this is the Lord Yahweh's declaration—I will not let you question me.
+\v 31 For when you offer up your gifts and you put your sons into the fire, to this day you make yourselves unclean with all your idols. So why should I let you question me, house of Israel? As I live—this is the Lord Yahweh's declaration—I will not let you question me.
-\v 32 The thought that is forming in your mind will come true. You say, "Let us be like the other nations, like the clans in the other lands who worship wood and stone."
+\v 32 The thought that is forming in your mind will never happen. You say, "Let us be like the other nations, like the clans in the other lands who worship wood and stone."
 
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