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 \q1 They go up the ascent of Luhith weeping;
 \q1 on the road to Horonaim they loudly wail over their destruction.
 \q1
-\v 6 The waters of Nimrim have dried up;
-\q1 the grass is withered away and the new grass dies; nothing is green.
+\v 6 The waters of Nimrim are a desolation;
+\q1 the grass is withered; 
+\q1 the vegetation has dried up; 
+\q1 there is no more green grass.
 \q1
 \v 7 The abundance they have grown and stored
 \q1 they carry away over the brook of the poplars.
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 \q1 and the rushing of nations, that rush like the rushing of mighty waters!
 \q1
 \v 13 The nations will roar like the rushing of many waters,
-\q1 but God will rebuke them. They will flee far away
-\q1 and will be chased as the dead weeds on the mountains before the wind, and like weeds whirling before a storm.
+\q1 but he will rebuke them and they will flee far away,
+\q1 they will be chased before the wind like chaff on the mountains, 
+\q1 and like weeds whirling before a storm.
 \q1
 \v 14 In the evening, see, terror! Before the morning they will be gone!
 \q1 This is the portion of those who loot us, the lot of those who rob us.