OT Gen 30:37 #792

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opened 2020-09-14 18:00:58 +00:00 by TomWarren · 3 comments

TomWarren commented

2020-09-14 18:00:58 +00:00

ULB Gen 30:37

\v 37 Jacob took fresh cut branches of fresh poplar, and of the almond and of the plane tree, and peeled white streaks in them, and made the white inner wood appear that was in the sticks.

Confusion about freshness. Non-clarification. Made more clear.

Suggestion:

\v 37 Jacob took fresh cut branches of the poplar, almond, and plane trees, and he peeled their bark, exposing the white inner wood of the branches.

Tom W

ULB Gen 30:37 \v 37 Jacob took fresh cut branches of fresh poplar, and of the almond and of the plane tree, and peeled white streaks in them, and made the white inner wood appear that was in the sticks. Confusion about freshness. Non-clarification. Made more clear. Suggestion: \v 37 Jacob took fresh cut branches of the poplar, almond, and plane trees, and he peeled their bark, exposing the white inner wood of the branches. Tom W

JohnH commented

2020-10-28 17:39:09 +00:00

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fresh cut branches of fresh poplar versus fresh cut branches of the poplar
Not sure why "fresh" is repeated. I agree with Tom's suggestion.

and of the almond and of the plane tree versus and of the almond and of the plane tree
Tom's reading is more natural. I think we should change it.

peeled white streaks in them, and made the white inner wood appear that was in the sticks versus he peeled their bark, exposing the white inner wood of the branches.
ULB adequate

**fresh cut branches of fresh poplar** versus **fresh cut branches of the poplar** Not sure why "fresh" is repeated. I agree with Tom's suggestion. **and of the almond and of the plane tree** versus **and of the almond and of the plane tree** Tom's reading is more natural. I think we should change it. **peeled white streaks in them, and made the white inner wood appear that was in the sticks** versus **he peeled their bark, exposing the white inner wood of the branches.** ULB adequate

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Drew

label 2020-10-28 17:39:13 +00:00

drewc commented

2020-10-28 18:36:17 +00:00

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Agreed

JohnH commented

2020-10-29 18:10:20 +00:00

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ULB now reads: \v 37 Jacob took fresh cut branches of the poplar, almond, and plane trees, and he peeled white streaks in them and made the white inner wood appear that was in the sticks.

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ULB now reads: \v 37 Jacob took fresh cut branches of the poplar, almond, and plane trees, and he peeled white streaks in them and made the white inner wood appear that was in the sticks. Updated notes

JohnH closed this issue

2020-10-29 18:10:20 +00:00