Last Review ULB Jer 18:23 #750

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opened 2020-08-20 16:47:13 +00:00 by TomWarren · 3 comments

TomWarren commented

2020-08-20 16:47:13 +00:00

ULB Jer 18:23 currently reads:

\v 23 But you, Yahweh, you know all of their plans against me to kill me.
\q Do not forgive their iniquities and sins. Do not wipe their sins away from you.
\q Instead, let them be overthrown before you. Act against them in the time of your wrath.

ULB Jer 18:23 suggested changes:

\v 23 But you, Yahweh, you know all of their plans against me to kill me.
\q Do not forgive their iniquity, and do not blot out their sin from your sight.
\q Let them be overthrown before you; deal with them in the time of your anger!

Tom W

ULB Jer 18:23 currently reads: \v 23 But you, Yahweh, you know all of their plans against me to kill me. \q Do not forgive their **iniquities and sins**. Do not **wipe** their **sins away from you.** \q **Instead,** let them be overthrown before you. **Act against them** in the time of your **wrath.** ULB Jer 18:23 suggested changes: \v 23 But you, Yahweh, you know all of their plans against me to kill me. \q Do not forgive their **iniquity, and** do not **blot out** their **sin from your sight.** \q Let them be overthrown before you; **deal with them** in the time of your **anger!** Tom W

SusanQuigley commented

2020-10-29 19:20:29 +00:00

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"iniquities and sins" vs "iniquity"
Hebrew: 'their iniquity'
Delete 'and sins'
Plural of iniquities is adequate

"wipe ... away" vs "blot out"
Heb: מָחָה 'to wipe, wipe out'
Most versions have "blot out"
4 have "wipe out"
ULB is adequate

"away from you" vs "from your sight"
מִלְּפָנֶ֣יךָ 'from before your face'
Most versions have "from your sight"
Some have "(from) before you"
ULB is adequate

"sins" vs "sin"
Hebrew: singular
Only 4 versions have plural.
But ULB is adequate

"Instead" vs Ø
No need for "Instead"
I'd like to delete "Instead".

"Act against them" vs "Deal with them"
Hebrew: עָשָׂה 'do, make'
Hebrew: בָהֶֽם 'with them'
ULB is adequate

"wrath" vs "anger"
ULB is adequate

"iniquities and sins" vs "iniquity" Hebrew: 'their iniquity' **Delete 'and sins'** **Plural of iniquities is adequate** "wipe ... away" vs "blot out" Heb: מָחָה 'to wipe, wipe out' Most versions have "blot out" 4 have "wipe out" **ULB is adequate** "away from you" vs "from your sight" מִלְּפָנֶ֣יךָ 'from before your face' Most versions have "from your sight" Some have "(from) before you" **ULB is adequate** "sins" vs "sin" Hebrew: singular Only 4 versions have plural. **But ULB is adequate** "Instead" vs Ø No need for "Instead" **I'd like to delete "Instead".** "Act against them" vs "Deal with them" Hebrew: עָשָׂה 'do, make' Hebrew: בָהֶֽם 'with them' **ULB is adequate** "wrath" vs "anger" **ULB is adequate**

SusanQuigley added the

Drew

label 2020-10-29 19:20:40 +00:00

drewc commented

2020-10-29 19:38:48 +00:00

Owner

Agreed

SusanQuigley commented

2020-10-30 19:15:22 +00:00

Owner

Changed to this and updated snippet.

\v 23 But you, Yahweh, you know all of their plans against me to kill me.
\q Do not forgive their iniquities. Do not wipe their sins away from you.
\q Let them be overthrown before you. Act against them in the time of your wrath.

Changed to this and updated snippet. \v 23 But you, Yahweh, you know all of their plans against me to kill me. \q Do not forgive their iniquities. Do not wipe their sins away from you. \q Let them be overthrown before you. Act against them in the time of your wrath.

SusanQuigley closed this issue

2020-10-30 19:15:22 +00:00