Last Review ULB ISA 57:13

TomWarren commented

2020-08-19 16:44:35 +00:00

ULB ISA 57:13

\v 13 When you cry out, let your collection of idols rescue you.
\q1 Instead the wind will carry them all away, a breath will carry them all away.
\q1 Yet he who takes refuge in me will inherit the land and will take possession of my holy mountain.

ULB ISA 57:13

\v 13 When you cry out, let your collection of idols rescue you!
\q1 The wind will carry them all away,
\q1 a breath will carry them all away.
\q1 But he who takes refuge in me will inherit the land
\q1 and will possess my holy mountain.

Tom W

ULB ISA 57:13 \v 13 When you cry out, let your collection of idols rescue you. \q1 **Instead** the wind will carry them all away, a breath will carry them all away. \q1 **Yet** he who takes refuge in me will inherit the land and **will take possession of** my holy mountain. ULB ISA 57:13 \v 13 When you cry out, let your collection of idols rescue you! \q1 The wind will carry them all away, \q1 a breath will carry them all away. \q1 **But** he who takes refuge in me will inherit the land \q1 and **will possess** my holy mountain. Tom W

SusanQuigley commented

2020-10-23 20:19:40 +00:00

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"Instead" vs Ø
"Instead doesn't fit here.
I think it would be good to delete "Instead"

"Yet" vs "But"
"But" is better.

"will take possession of" vs "will possess"
I think "will possess" is better if it's the situation that exists after they inherit the land.

I like the shorter lines. It makes it easier to read and understand.
I'd like to make the change.

"Instead" vs Ø "Instead doesn't fit here. **I think it would be good to delete "Instead"** "Yet" vs "But" **"But" is better.** "will take possession of" vs "will possess" **I think "will possess" is better if it's the situation that exists after they inherit the land.** **I like the shorter lines. It makes it easier to read and understand.** I'd like to make the change.

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drewc commented

2020-10-23 20:25:47 +00:00

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Agreed. I want John to check the theology of will possess v. take possession of. The issue of inheritance and possession of the land can be a bit tricky theologically. I think it is a good change, but I want him to verify.