Last Review ULB Isa 5:7 #730

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opened 2020-08-19 16:05:37 +00:00 by TomWarren · 2 comments

ULB Isa 5:7 currently reads:

\v 7 For the vineyard of Yahweh of hosts is the house of Israel,
\q1 and the man of Judah his pleasant planting;
\q1 he waited for justice, but instead, there was killing; for righteousness, but, instead, a shout for help.

ULB Isa 5:7 suggested changes:

\v 7 For the vineyard of Yahweh of hosts is the house of Israel,
\q1 and the man of Judah his pleasant planting;
\q1 he waited for justice, but there was bloodshed;
\q1 for righteousness, but there was a shout for help.

Tom W.

ULB Isa 5:7 currently reads: \v 7 For the vineyard of Yahweh of hosts is the house of Israel, \q1 and the man of Judah his pleasant planting; \q1 he waited for justice, **but instead**, there was **killing**; for righteousness, **but, instead,** a shout for help. ULB Isa 5:7 suggested changes: \v 7 For the vineyard of Yahweh of hosts is the house of Israel, \q1 and the man of Judah his pleasant planting; \q1 he waited for justice, **but** there was **bloodshed**; \q1 for righteousness, **but** there was a shout for help. Tom W.
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"but instead" vs "but" (twice)
Instead is no necessary, but ULB is adequate.

"killing" vs "bloodshed"
ULB is adequate.

"but instead" vs "but" (twice) **Instead is no necessary, but ULB is adequate.** "killing" vs "bloodshed" **ULB is adequate.**
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Drew
label 2020-10-22 21:47:22 +00:00
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Agreed.

Agreed.
drewc closed this issue 2020-10-23 12:30:24 +00:00
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