Last Review ULB Job 36:6-7 #722

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opened 2020-08-18 18:01:58 +00:00 by TomWarren · 3 comments

TomWarren commented

2020-08-18 18:01:58 +00:00

ULB Job 36:6-7 currently reads:

\v 6 He does not preserve the life of wicked people
\q but instead does what is right for those who suffer.
\q
\v 7 He does not withdraw his eyes from righteous people
\q but instead sets them on thrones like kings forever,
\q and they are lifted up.

ULB Job 36:6-7 suggested changes:

\v 6 He does not keep the wicked alive,
\q but he gives justice to the afflicted.
\q
\v 7 He does not withdraw his eyes from the righteous,
\q but with kings on the throne
\q he has seated them forever and they have become exalted.

Tom W.

ULB Job 36:6-7 currently reads: \v 6 He does not **preserve the life of wicked people** \q but **instead does what is right for those who suffer**. \q \v 7 He does not withdraw his eyes from **righteous people** \q but **instead sets them on thrones like kings forever,** \q **and they are lifted up.** ULB Job 36:6-7 suggested changes: \v 6 He does not **keep the wicked alive**, \q but **he gives justice to the afflicted.** \q \v 7 He does not withdraw his eyes from **the righteous,** \q **but with kings on the throne** \q **he has seated them forever and they have become exalted.** Tom W.

SusanQuigley commented

2020-10-20 19:12:48 +00:00

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6 "preserve the life of wicked people" vs "keep the wicked alive"
ULB is adequate

6 "but instead" vs "but"
No need for "instead'. I would like to delete it.

6 "does what is right for" vs "he gives justice to"
Suggestion is more literal and specific.
Change to "gives justice to"

6 "those who suffer" vs "the afflicted"
ULB is adequate

7 "righteous people" vs "the righteous"
ULB is adequate

7 "instead" vs Ø
No need for "instead'. I would like to delete it.

"but instead sets them on thrones like kings forever" vs "but with kings on the throne \q he has seated them forever"
Heb: וְאֶת־ מְלָכִ֥ים -- h854 'with (denoting proximity)'
ULB structure is adequate
Change "like" to "with"
Tense/aspect is adequate

"and they are lifted up" vs "and they have become exalted"
ULB is adequate

Suggestion
\v 6 He does not preserve the life of wicked people
\q but gives just to those who suffer.
\q
\v 7 He does not withdraw his eyes from righteous people
\q but sets them on thrones with kings forever,
\q and they are lifted up.

**6** "preserve the life of wicked people" vs "keep the wicked alive" **ULB is adequate** **6** "but instead" vs "but" **No need for "instead'. I would like to delete it**. **6** "does what is right for" vs "he gives justice to" Suggestion is more literal and specific. **Change to "gives justice to"** **6** "those who suffer" vs "the afflicted" **ULB is adequate** **7** "righteous people" vs "the righteous" **ULB is adequate** **7** "instead" vs Ø **No need for "instead'. I would like to delete it**. "but instead sets them on thrones like kings forever" vs "but with kings on the throne \q he has seated them forever" Heb: וְאֶת־ מְלָכִ֥ים -- h854 'with (denoting proximity)' **ULB structure is adequate** **Change "like" to "with"** **Tense/aspect is adequate** "and they are lifted up" vs "and they have become exalted" **ULB is adequate** Suggestion \v 6 He does not preserve the life of wicked people \q **but gives just to** those who suffer. \q \v 7 He does not withdraw his eyes from righteous people \q **but sets** them on thrones **with** kings forever, \q and they are lifted up.