Last Review ULB Job 30:26 #721

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opened 2020-08-18 17:53:34 +00:00 by TomWarren · 3 comments

TomWarren commented

2020-08-18 17:53:34 +00:00

ULB Job 30:26

\v 26 When I hoped for good, then evil came;
\q when I waited for light, darkness came instead.

ULB Job 30:26

\v 26 But when I hoped for good, then evil came;
\q and I waited for light, darkness came.

Tom W

ULB Job 30:26 \v 26 When I hoped for good, then evil came; \q when I waited for light, darkness came instead. ULB Job 30:26 \v 26 But when I hoped for good, then evil came; \q and I waited for light, darkness came. Tom W

SusanQuigley commented

2020-10-20 18:49:15 +00:00

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"when I waited for light" vs "and I waited for light"
ULB is adequate

"darkness came instead" vs "darkness came"
No need for "instead". I'd like to delete it.

"when I waited for light" vs "and I waited for light" **ULB is adequate** "darkness came instead" vs "darkness came" **No need for "instead". I'd like to delete it.**