Last Review ULB Job 3:26 #719

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opened 2020-08-18 17:47:49 +00:00 by TomWarren · 3 comments

TomWarren commented

2020-08-18 17:47:49 +00:00

ULB Job 3:26 currently reads:

\v 26 I am not at ease, I am not quiet, and I have no rest;
\q trouble comes instead."

ULB Job 3:26 suggested changes:

\v 26 I am not at ease, I am not at peace,
\q and I am not at rest, but trouble has comes."

Tom W.

ULB Job 3:26 currently reads: \v 26 I am not at ease, I am not quiet, and I have no rest; \q trouble comes instead." ULB Job 3:26 suggested changes: \v 26 I am not at ease, I am not at peace, \q and I am not at rest, but trouble has comes." Tom W.

SusanQuigley commented

2020-10-20 18:46:13 +00:00

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"I am not quiet" vs "I am not at peace"
ULB is adequate as long as we have a tN.

"and I have no rest" vs "and I am not at rest"
ULB is adequate

"and I have no rest; \q" vs "\q and I am not at rest"
Heb: the first 3 verbs are perfect, and the last is imperfect.
Heb has what looks like an em-dash before the last verb.
Versions vary in how they divide the clauses:
Some versions have 3+1 and some have 2+2.
Location of line break is adequate

"trouble comes instead" vs "but trouble has come"
No versions have "instead" but 3 use "only"
ULB is adequate

"I am not quiet" vs "I am not at peace" **ULB is adequate** as long as we have a tN. "and I have no rest" vs "and I am not at rest" **ULB is adequate** "and I have no rest; \q" vs "\q and I am not at rest" Heb: the first 3 verbs are perfect, and the last is imperfect. Heb has what looks like an em-dash before the last verb. Versions vary in how they divide the clauses: Some versions have 3+1 and some have 2+2. **Location of line break is adequate** "trouble comes instead" vs "but trouble has come" No versions have "instead" but 3 use "only" **ULB is adequate**