Last Review ULB DEU 29:20 #663

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opened 2020-08-13 18:21:48 +00:00 by TomWarren · 3 comments

TomWarren commented

2020-08-13 18:21:48 +00:00

ULB DEU 29:20 currently reads:

\v 20 Yahweh will not pardon him, but instead, the anger of Yahweh and his jealousy will smolder against that man, and all the curses that are written in this book will come on him, and Yahweh will blot out his name from under heaven.

ULB DEU 29:20 suggestions:

\v 20 Yahweh will not forgive him, but rather the anger of Yahweh and his jealousy will come down against that man, and the curses written in this book will settle upon him, and Yahweh will blot out his name from under heaven.

Tom W

ULB DEU 29:20 currently reads: \v 20 Yahweh will not **pardon** him, **but instead,** the anger of Yahweh and his jealousy **will smolder** against that man, and **all the curses that are written** in this book **will come on him**, and Yahweh will blot out his name from under heaven. ULB DEU 29:20 suggestions: \v 20 Yahweh will not **forgive** him, **but rather** the anger of Yahweh and his jealousy **will come down** against that man, and **the curses written** in this book **will settle upon him**, and Yahweh will blot out his name from under heaven. Tom W

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SusanQuigley commented

2020-10-16 19:43:59 +00:00

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"pardon" vs "forgive"
ULB has "pardon" 15 times.
ULB is adequate.

"but instead" vs "but rather"
Heb: כִּ֣י
I think change to "Rather".

**will smolder" vs "will come down"
Heb יֶעְשַׁ֨ן
ULB is adequate

"all the curses that are written" vs "the curses written"
Heb: כָּל־
ULB is adequate

will come on him" vs "will settle upon him"
Heb: וְרָ֤בְצָה stretch oneself out, lie down, lie stretched out
But ULB is adequate

"pardon" vs "forgive" ULB has "pardon" 15 times. **ULB is adequate.** "but instead" vs "but rather" Heb: כִּ֣י **I think change to "Rather".** **will smolder" vs "will come down" Heb יֶעְשַׁ֨ן **ULB is adequate** "all the curses that are written" vs "the curses written" Heb: כָּל־ **ULB is adequate** will come on him" vs "will settle upon him" Heb: וְרָ֤בְצָה stretch oneself out, lie down, lie stretched out **But ULB is adequate**