Last Review ULB DEU 21:22-3 #658

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opened 2020-08-13 17:44:35 +00:00 by TomWarren · 4 comments

TomWarren commented

2020-08-13 17:44:35 +00:00

ULB DEU 21:22-23

\v 22 If a man has committed a sin worthy of death and he is put to death, and you hang him on a tree,
\v 23 then his body must not remain all night on the tree. Instead, you must surely bury him the same day; for whoever is hanged is cursed by God. Obey this commandment so that you do not defile the land that Yahweh your God is giving you as an inheritance.

ULB DEU 21:22-23

\v 22 If a anyone has committed a sin punishable by death, and is put to death and you hang him on a tree,
\v 23 then the body must not remain all night on the tree, but you must bury it the same day, for anyone who is hanged is cursed by God. You must not defile your land that Yahweh your God is giving you as an inheritance.

Some additional issues, pulled back to the Heb text.

ULB DEU 21:22-23 \v 22 If **a man** has committed a sin **worthy of** death and **he is** put to death, and you hang him on a tree, \v 23 then his body must not remain all night on the tree. **Instead, you** must **surely bury him** the same day; for **whoever** is hanged is cursed by God. **Obey this commandment so that you do not defile the** land that Yahweh your God is giving you as an inheritance. ULB DEU 21:22-23 \v 22 If a **anyone** has committed a sin **punishable by** death, and **is** put to death and you hang him on a tree, \v 23 then **the** body must not remain all night on the tree, **but you** must **bury it** the same day, for **anyone who** is hanged is cursed by God. **You must not defile your** land that Yahweh your God is giving you as an inheritance. Some additional issues, pulled back to the Heb text.

hmw3 commented

2020-08-13 18:15:27 +00:00

\v 22 If anyone has committed a sin punishable by death and is put to death, and you hang him

\v 22 **If anyone** has committed a sin punishable by **death and** is put to **death, and** you hang him

SusanQuigley commented

2020-10-16 15:35:30 +00:00

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22 "a man" vs "anyone"
ULB is adequate

22 "worthy of death" vs "punishable by death"
ULB is adequate

22 "and he is put to death" vs "and is put to death"
ULB is adequate

23 "his body" vs "the body"
ULB is adequate

23 Instead, you" vs "but you"
I'd like to just delete "Instead"

23 "you must surely bury him" vs "you must bury it"
"surely" is adequate
"him" is adequate

23 whoever vs anyone who
ULB is adequate

23 "Obey this commandment so that you do not defile" vs "You must not defile"
The first clause is info that the ULB makes explicit.
Is this too paraphrastic for ULB?

23 the land vs your land
Suggestions is more literal, but ULB is adequate

Punctuation
The ULB has "; for" about 90 times.
ULB is adequate

**22** "a man" vs "anyone" **ULB is adequate** **22** "worthy of death" vs "punishable by death" **ULB is adequate** **22** "and he is put to death" vs "and is put to death" **ULB is adequate** **23** "his body" vs "the body" **ULB is adequate** **23** Instead, you" vs "but you" **I'd like to just delete "Instead"** **23** "you must surely bury him" vs "you must bury it" **"surely" is adequate** **"him" is adequate** **23** whoever vs anyone who **ULB is adequate** **23** "Obey this commandment so that you do not defile" vs "You must not defile" The first clause is info that the ULB makes explicit. **Is this too paraphrastic for ULB?** **23** the land vs your land Suggestions is more literal, but **ULB is adequate** **Punctuation** The ULB has "; for" about 90 times. **ULB is adequate**