Last Review ULB DEU 21:17 #657

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opened 2020-08-13 17:34:12 +00:00 by TomWarren · 3 comments

ULB DEU 21:17 currently:

\v 17 Instead, he must acknowledge the firstborn, the son of the hated wife, by giving him a double portion of all that he possesses; for that son is the beginning of his strength; the right of the firstborn belongs to him.

ULB DEU 21:17 suggested changes:

\v 17 He must acknowledge the firstborn, the son of the hated wife, by giving him a double portion of all that he possesses, for that son is the beginning of his strength. The right of the firstborn belongs to him.

Simplifying .

Tom W

ULB DEU 21:17 currently: \v 17 Instead, he must acknowledge the firstborn, the son of the hated wife, by giving him a double portion of all that he possesses; for that son is the beginning of his strength; the right of the firstborn belongs to him. ULB DEU 21:17 suggested changes: \v 17 He must acknowledge the firstborn, the son of the hated wife, by giving him a double portion of all that he possesses, for that son is the beginning of his strength. The right of the firstborn belongs to him. Simplifying . Tom W
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Instead vs Ø
Heb: כִּי֩
3 versions have "Instead".
I'm fine with deleting "Instead".

Punctuation: Tom's suggestion is better than the current ULB.
Is the punctuation a small enough issue that we shouldn't bother with it, or is it a small enough issue that it's ok to change it?

Instead vs Ø Heb: כִּי֩ 3 versions have "Instead". I'm fine with deleting "Instead". Punctuation: Tom's suggestion is better than the current ULB. Is the punctuation a small enough issue that we shouldn't bother with it, or is it a small enough issue that it's ok to change it?
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Drew
label 2020-10-16 15:18:45 +00:00
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I think we should change it for clarity. This double semicolon is bound to confuse people.

I think we should change it for clarity. This double semicolon is bound to confuse people.
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Fixed punctuation and checked tN.

Fixed punctuation and checked tN.
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