GEN 4:20 Missing conjunction #1051

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opened 2022-01-12 18:30:12 +00:00 by bobj · 3 comments

bobj commented

2022-01-12 18:30:12 +00:00

\v 20 Adah gave birth to Jabal. He was the father of those who lived in tents who have livestock.

ISSUE: Conjunction missing before "who have livestock."

SUGGESTED CHANGE:
\v 20 Adah gave birth to Jabal. He was the father of those who lived in tents and who have livestock.

NOTE: This change, if made, would affect the translation notes.

\v 20 Adah gave birth to Jabal. He was the father of those who lived in tents who have livestock. ISSUE: Conjunction missing before "who have livestock." SUGGESTED CHANGE: \v 20 Adah gave birth to Jabal. He was the father of those who lived in tents and who have livestock. NOTE: This change, if made, would affect the translation notes.

SusanQuigley commented

2022-02-11 14:49:01 +00:00

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I think it would be good to add "and" to the ULB and TN snippet and to remove the second "who".

I wonder why the ULB has past tense "lived". Other versions have present tense.

Suggested changes:
\v 20 Adah gave birth to Jabal. He was the father of those who live in tents and have livestock.

who live in tents and have livestock
people who both live in tents and also take care of large animals

I think it would be good to add "and" to the ULB and TN snippet and to remove the second "who". I wonder why the ULB has past tense "lived". Other versions have present tense. Suggested changes: \v 20 Adah gave birth to Jabal. He was the father of those who **live** in tents **and have** livestock. * **who *live* in tents *and have* livestock** * people who both live in tents and also take care of **large** animals