1SA 17:23 Fragment #1031

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opened 2021-12-28 18:56:38 +00:00 by bobj · 1 comment

bobj commented

2021-12-28 18:56:38 +00:00

\v 23 As he talked with them, the strong man, the Philistine of Gath, Goliath by name, and he came out of the ranks of the Philistines, and said the same words as before, and David heard them.

ISSUE: The noun phrase before the first "and" has no predicate as written.

SUGGESTION: Delete "and he" and one comma to make the verse:

\v 23 As he talked with them, the strong man, the Philistine of Gath, Goliath by name, came out of the ranks of the Philistines and said the same words as before, and David heard them.

\v 23 As he talked with them, the strong man, the Philistine of Gath, Goliath by name, and he came out of the ranks of the Philistines, and said the same words as before, and David heard them. ISSUE: The noun phrase before the first "and" has no predicate as written. SUGGESTION: Delete "and he" and one comma to make the verse: \v 23 As he talked with them, the strong man, the Philistine of Gath, Goliath by name, came out of the ranks of the Philistines and said the same words as before, and David heard them.

SusanQuigley commented

2021-12-28 20:05:52 +00:00

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TN does not need any changes. Its snippets are "Goliath by name" and "came out of the ranks of the Philistines".

John, please close this if you're ok with it.

I made those changes: \v 23 As he talked with them, the strong man, the Philistine of Gath, Goliath by name, came out of the ranks of the Philistines and said the same words as before, and David heard them. TN does not need any changes. Its snippets are "Goliath by name" and "came out of the ranks of the Philistines". John, please close this if you're ok with it.