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 \q
 \v 13 His cheeks are like beds of spices,
 \q yielding aromatic scents.
-\f + \ft The Hebrew text: \fqa yielding aromatic scents \fqa* could be translated as: \fqa garden beds made of balsam \fqa* . \f*
+\f + \ft The Hebrew text: \fqa yielding aromatic scents \fqa*. This phrase may possibly be read as: \fqa garden beds made of balsam \fqa* . \f*
 \q His lips are lilies, dripping with myrrh.
 
 \s5
@@ -617,7 +617,7 @@
 \q
 \v 11 Come, my beloved, let us go out into the countryside;
 \q let us spend the night in the villages.
-\f + \ft Some scholars translate the Hebrew as either \fqa in the villages \fqa* or it may be \fqa among the henna blossoms \fqa* . \f*
+\f + \ft The Hebrew could be read as either \fqa in the villages \fqa* or \fqa among the henna blossoms \fqa* . \f*
 
 \s5
 \q
@@ -710,7 +710,7 @@
 \sp The woman speaking to herself
 \q
 \v 10 I was a wall, and my breasts were now like fortress towers;
-\q so I am in his eyes as one who brings peace. \f + \ft Some versions translate the Hebrew: \fqa I am in his eyes as one who brings peace \fqa* and some versions have: \fqa so I have found favor in his eyes \fqa* . \f*
+\q so I am in his eyes as one who brings peace. \f + \ft Some scholars read a play on the Hebrew word for "peace" and translate the Hebrew either: \fqa I am in his eyes as one who brings peace \fqa* or: \fqa so I have found favor in his eyes \fqa* . \f*
 
 \s5
 \sp The woman speaking to herself