From 454defaf87e17f31025a98ab5ed1bc5fd9498dec Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Warren Date: Wed, 31 Aug 2016 10:10:41 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] Reader reports --- 01-GEN/30.usfm | 2 +- 01-GEN/31.usfm | 4 ++-- 01-GEN/34.usfm | 4 ++-- 01-GEN/49.usfm | 6 +++--- 4 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/01-GEN/30.usfm b/01-GEN/30.usfm index 4c4a3985..79e47f90 100644 --- a/01-GEN/30.usfm +++ b/01-GEN/30.usfm @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ \c 30 \p \v 1 When Rachel saw that she bore Jacob no children, Rachel envied her sister. She said to Jacob, "Give me children, or I will die." -\v 2 Jacob's anger was burned against Rachel. He said, "Am I in the place of God, who has kept you from having children?" +\v 2 Jacob's anger burned against Rachel. He said, "Am I in the place of God, who has kept you from having children?" \s5 \v 3 She said, "See, there is my servant Bilhah. Sleep with her, so she might give birth to children on my knees, and I will have children by her." diff --git a/01-GEN/31.usfm b/01-GEN/31.usfm index a2bf7d4f..d16dcafb 100644 --- a/01-GEN/31.usfm +++ b/01-GEN/31.usfm @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ \v 23 So he took his relatives with him and pursued him for a seven days' journey. He overtook him in the hill country of Gilead. \s5 -\v 24 Now God came to Laban the Aramean in a dream at night and said to him, "Be careful that you speak to Jacob neither good or bad." +\v 24 Now God came to Laban the Aramean in a dream at night and said to him, "Be careful that you speak to Jacob neither good nor bad." \v 25 Laban overtook Jacob. Now Jacob had pitched his tent in the hill country. Laban also camped with his relatives in the hill country of Gilead. \f + \ft Some modern versions have: \fqa Laban also camped in the hill country of Gilead. \fqb \f* @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ \v 28 You did not allow me to kiss my grandsons and my daughters good bye. Now you have done foolishly. \s5 -\v 29 It is in my power to do you harm, but the God of your father spoke to me last night and said, 'Be careful that you speak to Jacob neither good or bad.' +\v 29 It is in my power to do you harm, but the God of your father spoke to me last night and said, 'Be careful that you speak to Jacob neither good nor bad.' \v 30 And now, you have gone away because you longed very much for your father's house. But why have you stolen my gods?" \s5 diff --git a/01-GEN/34.usfm b/01-GEN/34.usfm index 2826e1cc..db8fcbbf 100644 --- a/01-GEN/34.usfm +++ b/01-GEN/34.usfm @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ \c 34 \p \v 1 Now Dinah, Leah's daughter whom she bore to Jacob, went out to meet the young women of the land. -\v 2 Shechem son of Hamor the Hivite, the prince of the land, saw her and he grabbed her, assaulted her, and slept her. +\v 2 Shechem son of Hamor the Hivite, the prince of the land, saw her and he grabbed her, assaulted her, and slept with her. \v 3 He was drawn to Dinah, the daughter of Jacob. He loved the young woman and spoke tenderly to her. \s5 @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ \s5 \v 8 Hamor spoke with them, saying, "My son Shechem loves your daughter. Please give her to him as a wife. -\v 9 Intermarry with us, Give your daughters to us, and take our daughters for yourselves. +\v 9 Intermarry with us, give your daughters to us, and take our daughters for yourselves. \v 10 You will live with us, and the land will be open to you to live and trade in, and to acquire property." \s5 diff --git a/01-GEN/49.usfm b/01-GEN/49.usfm index 472bc46b..a6abed9a 100644 --- a/01-GEN/49.usfm +++ b/01-GEN/49.usfm @@ -101,9 +101,9 @@ the future. \s5 \q -\v 26 The blessings of your father will be greater than of the ancient mountains -\q or of the desirable things of the everlasting hills. -\q They will be on the head of Joseph, blessings that crown the head of the one who was prince over his brothers. +\v 26 The blessings of your father are greater than the blessings of the ancient mountains +\q or the desireable things of the ancient hills. +\q May they be on the head of Joseph, even upon the crown of the head of the prince of his brothers. \s5 \q