Changes from John H and Susan Q

12-2KI/11.usfm

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-\v 21 Joash was seven years old when he began to reign.
+\v 21 Jehoash was seven years old when he began to reign.
 
 
 

12-2KI/12.usfm

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 \v 1 In the seventh year of Jehu, the reign of Joash began; he reigned for forty years in Jerusalem. His mother's name was Zibiah, of Beersheba.
-\v 2 Joash did what was right in the eyes of Yahweh all the time, because Jehoiada the priest was instructing him.
+\v 2 Jehoash did what was right in the eyes of Yahweh all the time, because Jehoiada the priest was instructing him.
 \v 3 But the high places were not taken away. The people still sacrificed and burned incense on the high places.
 
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12-2KI/13.usfm

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 \v 8 As for the other matters concerning Jehoahaz, and all that he did and his power, are they not written in The Book of the Events of the Kings of Israel?
-\v 9 So Jehoahaz slept with his ancestors, and they buried him in Samaria. Joash his son became king in his place.
+\v 9 So Jehoahaz slept with his ancestors, and they buried him in Samaria. Johoash his son became king in his place.
 
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 by which he had made Israel to sin, but he walked in them.
 
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-\v 12 As for the other matters concerning Joash, and all that he did, and his might by which he fought against Amaziah king of Judah, are they not written in The Book of the Events of the Kings of Israel?
-\v 13 Joash slept with his ancestors, and Jeroboam sat on his throne. Joash was buried in Samaria with the kings of Israel.
+\v 12 As for the other matters concerning Jehoash, and all that he did, and his might by which he fought against Amaziah king of Judah, are they not written in The Book of the Events of the Kings of Israel?
+\v 13 Jehoash slept with his ancestors, and Jeroboam sat on his throne. Joash was buried in Samaria with the kings of Israel.
 
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-\v 14 Now Elisha became sick with an illness by which he later died, so Joash the king of Israel came down to him and wept over him. He said, "My father, my father, the chariots of Israel and the horsemen are taking you away!"
+\v 14 Now Elisha became sick with an illness by which he later died, so Jehoash the king of Israel came down to him and wept over him. He said, "My father, my father, the chariots of Israel and the horsemen are taking you away!"
 \v 15 Elisha said to him, "Pick up a bow and some arrows," so Joash picked up a bow and some arrows.
 \v 16 Elisha said to the king of Israel, "Put your hand on the bow," so he put his hand on it. Then Elisha laid his hands on the king's hands.
 
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 \v 24 Hazael king of Aram died, and Ben Hadad his son became king in his place.
-\v 25 Jehoash son of Jehoahaz took back from Ben Hadad son of Hazael the cities that had been taken from Jehoahaz his father by war. Joash attacked him three times, and he recovered those cities of Israel.
+\v 25 Jehoash son of Jehoahaz took back from Ben Hadad son of Hazael the cities that had been taken from Jehoahaz his father by war. Jehoash attacked him three times, and he recovered those cities of Israel.
 
 
 

18-JOB/27.usfm

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-\v 1 Job resumed speaking and said,
+\v 1 Job resumed speaking and he said,
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-\v 2 "As God lives, who has taken away my justice,
+\v 2 "As surely as God lives, who has taken away my justice,
 \q the Almighty, who made my life bitter,
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-\v 3 as long as my life is yet in me
-\q and breath from God is in my nostrils.
+\v 3 for while my life is yet in me,
+\q and the breath from God is in my nostrils, 
+\q this is what I will do.
 
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-\v 4 Surely my lips will not speak unrighteousness,
-\q neither will my tongue speak deceit.
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-\v 5 I will never admit that you are right;
+\v 4 My lips will not speak wickedness,
+\q neither will my tongue speak deceit;
+\v 5 I will never admit that you three are right;
 \q until I die I will never deny my integrity.
 
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18-JOB/40.usfm

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 \v 22 The lotus plants cover him with their shade;
 \q the willows of the brook are all around him.
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-\v 23 See, if a river floods its banks, it does not tremble;
-\q he is confident, though a Jordan River should surge up to his snout.
+\v 23 See, if a river floods its banks, he does not tremble;
+\q he is confident, though the Jordan should surge up to his mouth.
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 \v 24 Can anyone capture him with a hook,
 \q or pierce his nose through with a snare?

27-DAN/05.usfm

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 \v 14 I have heard about you, that the spirit of the gods is in you, and that light and understanding and excellent wisdom are found in you.
 
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-\v 15 And now the men known for wisdom and those who claim to speak with the dead, have been brought in before me, to read this writing and make known to me its interpretation, but they could not make known the interpretation of it.
+\v 15 Now the men known for wisdom and those who claim to speak with the dead have been brought in before me to read this writing and make known to me its interpretation, but they could not make known the interpretation of it.
 \v 16 I have heard that you can give interpretations and solve problems. Now if you can read the writing and tell me its meaning, you will be clothed with purple and have a gold chain placed around your neck, and you will have the authority of the third highest ruler in the kingdom."
 
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