Mark: Copyedits from MaryEllen

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 \v 9 It happened in those days that Jesus came from Nazareth in Galilee, and he was baptized by John in the Jordan River.
 \v 10 As Jesus came up out of the water, he saw the heavens split open and the Spirit coming down on him like a dove.
-\v 11 A voice came out of the heavens, "You are my beloved Son. I am very pleased with you."
+\v 11 A voice came out of the heavens: "You are my beloved Son. I am very pleased with you."
 
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-\v 17 When Jesus heard this he said to them, "People who are strong in body do not need a physician; only people who are sick need one. I did not come to call righteous people, but sinners."
+\v 17 When Jesus heard this, he said to them, "People who are strong in body do not need a physician; only people who are sick need one. I did not come to call righteous people, but sinners."
 
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 \v 16 He appointed the twelve: Simon, to whom he gave the name Peter;
 
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-\v 17 James son of Zebedee, and John the brother of James, to whom he gave the name Boanerges, that is, sons of thunder;
+\v 17 James son of Zebedee, and John the brother of James, to whom he gave the name Boanerges, that is, "sons of thunder";
 \v 18 and Andrew, Philip, Bartholomew, Matthew, Thomas, James son of Alphaeus, Thaddaeus, Simon the Zealot,
 \v 19 and Judas Iscariot, who would betray him.
 
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 \v 7 Other seed fell among the thorn plants. The thorn plants grew up and choked it, and it did not produce a crop.
 
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-\v 8 Other seed fell into good soil and it produced a crop growing up and increasing and yielding thirty, sixty, and even a hundred times."
+\v 8 Other seed fell into good soil, and it produced a crop growing up and increasing and yielding thirty, sixty, and even a hundred times."
 \v 9 Then he said, "Whoever has ears to hear, let him hear!"
 
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-\v 16 But when Herod heard this he said, "John, whom I beheaded, has been raised."
+\v 16 But when Herod heard this, he said, "John, whom I beheaded, has been raised."
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 \v 17 For Herod sent to have John arrested and he had him bound in prison on account of Herodias (his brother Philip's wife), because he had married her.
 
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-\v 35 When the hour was late, his disciples came to him and said, "This is a deserted place and the hour is already late.
+\v 35 When the hour was late, his disciples came to him and said, "This is a deserted place, and the hour is already late.
 \v 36 Send them away so that they may go into the nearby countryside and villages to buy something to eat for themselves."
 
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 \v 47 Evening came, and the boat was now in the middle of the sea, and he was alone on land.
 
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-\v 48 He saw that they were straining against the oars, for the wind was against them. About the fourth watch of the night he came to them, walking on the sea, and he wanted to pass by them.
+\v 48 He saw that they were straining against the oars, for the wind was against them. About the fourth watch of the night, he came to them, walking on the sea, and he wanted to pass by them.
 \v 49 But when they saw him walking on the sea, they thought he was a ghost and cried out,
 \v 50 because they saw him and were troubled. Immediately he spoke to them and said to them, "Be courageous! It is I! Do not be afraid!"
 
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 \v 14 When they came to the disciples, they saw a great crowd around them, and scribes were arguing with them.
-\v 15 As soon as they saw Jesus, the whole crowd was amazed and as they ran up to him they greeted him.
+\v 15 As soon as they saw Jesus, the whole crowd was amazed, and as they ran up to him, they greeted him.
 \v 16 He asked his disciples, "What are you arguing with them about?"
 
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 \v 33 Then they came to Capernaum. After he entered the house he asked them, "What were you discussing on the way?"
-\v 34 But they were silent. For they had been arguing with one with another on the way about who was the greatest.
+\v 34 But they were silent. For they had been arguing with one another on the way about who was the greatest.
 \v 35 Sitting down, he called the twelve together and he said to them, "If anyone wants to be first, he must be last of all and servant of all."
 
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 \v 29 Jesus said to them, "I will ask you one question. Tell me and I will tell you by what authority I do these things.
-\v 30 The baptism of John, was it from heaven or from men? Answer me."
+\v 30 The baptism of John—was it from heaven or from men? Answer me."
 
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 \v 31 They discussed between themselves and argued and said, "If we say, 'From heaven,' he will say, 'Why then did you not believe him?'
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-\v 28 Learn a lesson from the fig tree. As soon as the branch becomes tender and puts out its leaves, you know that summer is near.
+\v 28 "Learn a lesson from the fig tree. As soon as the branch becomes tender and puts out its leaves, you know that summer is near.
 \v 29 So also, when you see these things happening, recognize that he is near, close to the gates.
 
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 \v 69 But the servant girl saw him and began to say again to those who stood there, "This man is one of them!"
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-\v 70 But he denied it again. After a little while those who stood there were saying to Peter, "Surely you are one of them, for you also are a Galilean."
+\v 70 But he denied it again. After a little while, those who stood there were saying to Peter, "Surely you are one of them, for you also are a Galilean."
 
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-\v 1 Early in the morning, the chief priests, with the elders and scribes and the entire Jewish council consulted together. Then they bound Jesus and led him away. They handed him over to Pilate.
+\v 1 Early in the morning, the chief priests, with the elders and scribes and the entire Jewish council, consulted together. Then they bound Jesus and led him away. They handed him over to Pilate.
 \v 2 Pilate asked him, "Are you the King of the Jews?"
 \p He answered him, "You say so."
 \v 3 The chief priests were accusing him of many things.
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 \v 25 It was the third hour when they crucified him.
 \v 26 On a sign they wrote the charge against him, "The king of the Jews."
 \v 27 With him they crucified two robbers, one on the right of him and one on his left.
-\v 28 \f + \ft The best ancient copies do not have Mark 15:28, \fqa The scripture was fulfilled that says, 'He was counted with the lawless ones,'
+\v 28 \f + \ft The best ancient copies do not have Mark 15:28, \fqa The scripture was fulfilled that says, 'He was counted with the lawless ones.'
 
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 \v 29 Those who passed by insulted him, shaking their heads and saying, "Aha! You who would destroy the temple and rebuild it in three days,
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 \v 39 When the centurion who stood and faced Jesus saw that he had died in this way, he said, "Truly this man was the Son of God."
 \v 40 There were also women who looked on from a distance. Among them were Mary Magdalene, Mary (the mother of James the younger and of Joses), \f + \ft The man called \fqa Joses \fqa* here is called \fqa Joseph \fqa* in Mark 6:3. The name \fqa Joseph \fqa* represents how the name was spelled in Hebrew, and the name \fqa Joses \fqa* represents how his name was spelled in Greek. \f* and Salome.
-\v 41 When he was in Galilee they followed him and served him. Many other women also came up with him to Jerusalem.
+\v 41 When he was in Galilee, they followed him and served him. Many other women also came up with him to Jerusalem.
 
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