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-\v 1 I, Paul, a prisoner of Christ Jesus, and Timothy our brother, are writing to Philemon our dear friend and fellow worker,
+\v 1 Paul, a prisoner of Christ Jesus, and the brother Timothy to Philemon, our dear friend and fellow worker,
 \v 2 and to Apphia our sister, and to Archippus our fellow soldier, and to the church that meets in your home:
 \v 3 Grace to you and peace from God our Father and the Lord Jesus Christ.
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-\v 4 I thank my God always, making mention of you in my prayers,
-\v 5 hearing of the faith that you have in the Lord Jesus and of your love for all the believers.
-\v 6 I pray that the active sharing of your faith may help you grow in the knowledge of everything good that belongs to us in Christ.
+\v 4 I always thank my God. I mention you in my prayers.
+\v 5 I have heard of the love and the faith that you have in the Lord Jesus and for all the believers.
+\v 6 I pray that the sharing of your faith may help you grow in the knowledge of everything good that belongs to us in Christ.
 \v 7 For your love has given me much joy and comfort, because you, brother, refreshed the hearts of the believers.
 
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