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25-LAM/01.usfm

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-\v 10 The adversary has put his hand on all her precious treasures.
+\v 10 The adversary has put his hand on all our precious treasures.
 \q She has seen the nations enter her sanctuary, 
 \q even though you had commanded that they must not enter into your assembly place.
 
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@
 \q Hear, all you peoples, and see my sorrow.
 \q My virgins and my vigorous men have gone into captivity.
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-\v 19 I called for my lovers, but they were treacherous toward me.
+\v 19 I called for my friends, but they were treacherous toward me.
 \q My priests and my elders perished in the city,
 \q while they sought food to restore their lives.
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@@ -107,13 +107,13 @@
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 \v 20 Look, Yahweh, for I am in distress; my innermost parts churn about.
 \q My heart is turned within me for I have grievously rebelled.
-\q In the streets the sword takes our children; at home it is like the world of the dead.
+\q From outside the sword cuts off life. It has become like death in the house.
 
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 \v 21 Hear me groan. There is no one to comfort me.
 \q All my enemies have heard of my adversity. They rejoice that you have done it.
-\q Bring the day that you have proclaimed; may they become like me.
+\q Bring on the day you have promised, that they may they become like me.
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 \v 22 Let all their wickedness come before you.
 \q Torment them as you have tormented me for all my transgressions; 

25-LAM/03.usfm

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 \v 22 It is by the covenant faithfulness of Yahweh that we are not destroyed, for his merciful actions have not come to an end.
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-\v 23 His merciful actions occur afresh every morning; great is your faithfulness!
+\v 23 His merciful actions toward us are new every morning. Your faithfulness is great!
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 \v 24 "Yahweh is my inheritance," I have said to myself, so I will hope in him.