30:30 feverish fever #17

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opened 2019-11-20 11:57:00 +00:00 by bobj · 1 comment

bobj commented

2019-11-20 11:57:00 +00:00

\v 30 My skin has become dark and is peeling off,
\q2 and I have a fever that causes my body to feel as though it were burning up with a fever.

V.30b lit.: "and my bones burn with fever."; ULB "and my bones are burned with heat."

I eliminated the redundancy in the UDB and changed it to read:
\v 30 My skin has become dark and is peeling off,
\q2 and I have a fever that causes me to feel as though my bones were burning up.

\v 30 My skin has become dark and is peeling off, \q2 and **I have a fever that causes my body to feel as though it were burning up with a fever**. V.30b lit.: "and **my bones burn with fever**."; ULB "and **my bones are burned with heat**." I eliminated the redundancy in the UDB and changed it to read: \v 30 My skin has become dark and is peeling off, \q2 and **I have a fever that causes me to feel as though my bones were burning up**.