Commit Graph

1312 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
Hanker10 075f1961f0 Mt 23:17 cut "to use"
Mt 23:17 cut "to use" since "dedication" does not imply use except as suggesting glory and honor. To say "to use" implies God will somehow manipulate it.
2016-07-01 12:11:34 -04:00
Hanker10 91c6ffe0c1 Mt 23:13 cut redundant wording
Mt 23:13 cut redundant wording in the last two sentences. This did read: "You are like men who close a gate so that others cannot enter God's city. You yourselves do not want to go in, and you keep others from entering, too." I cut both sentences because this added a simile not in the original and the redundancy could confuse the MTTs.
2016-07-01 12:06:18 -04:00
Hanker10 ffbf6452d0 Mt 23:13 changed wording about kingdom
Mt 23:13 changed wording about kingdom from: "because you keep people from accepting him to rule over them." to what you see. I restored the word "heaven" since this is an important concept in Matthew that should not be lost. The rule of heaven includes Jesus, the Christ, as ruler and as God which is part of Matthew's distinct message compared to the other gospels.
2016-07-01 12:00:33 -04:00
Hanker10 9ff9929533 Mt 23:13 cut narrative introduction
Mt 23:13 cut narrative introduction since this is explained in the notes and could lead MTTs to consider this as scripture
2016-07-01 11:42:12 -04:00
Hanker10 2ef2c129fa Mt 23:10 cut personal reference
Mt 23:10 cut personal reference for Jesus as the Christ since Jesus does not refer to himself this way until after the resurrection except by allusion.
2016-07-01 11:33:06 -04:00
Henry Whitney df74b89a33 euplaced misplaced apostrophe 2016-07-01 10:00:36 -04:00
Tom Warren 315f194957 Removing unnecessary "non-Jew"
from text.
2016-07-01 03:03:07 -04:00
Tom Warren 4450da585e removed inferential info 2016-06-30 20:03:01 -04:00
pohlig 272ec5d3a3 Update 24.usfm 2016-06-30 13:48:25 -04:00
pohlig b6931bf7c9 Update 11.usfm 2016-06-30 11:26:35 -04:00
Tom Warren 21d78e7070 Luk 24:7
The  Son of Man change to the Son of Man
2016-06-30 11:18:31 -04:00
pohlig a3902fab73 Update 08.usfm 2016-06-30 10:59:05 -04:00
Tom Warren adade3d0ba death and life flipped around 2016-06-30 10:58:34 -04:00
pohlig d040b1b027 Update 08.usfm 2016-06-30 10:57:17 -04:00
pohlig c8b07a1ec0 Update 08.usfm 2016-06-30 10:54:03 -04:00
pohlig 5119947dbb Update 06.usfm 2016-06-30 10:51:31 -04:00
pohlig 68a7b98dd1 Update 06.usfm 2016-06-30 10:45:31 -04:00
pohlig 7fc144ad14 Update 06.usfm 2016-06-30 10:43:59 -04:00
Tom Warren f623f276d0 creation 2016-06-30 08:30:35 -04:00
hharrissWA 589bff5a31 Update 06.usfm
v. 15
"... just like soldiers put on their boots firmly on."
changed to:
"... just like soldiers firmly put on their boots."
2016-06-30 07:01:22 -05:00
Tom Warren bc5d64d4f2 2:12 and 13
Rework in Nepal with MTT
2016-06-30 04:16:41 -04:00
Tom Warren b9eac0eb09 Rhetorical to statement 2016-06-30 00:59:25 -04:00
Tom Warren 64833be24f Each time
a little more info
a little less supplied info
2016-06-30 00:28:36 -04:00
Tom Warren f69d0c2ef8 day of rest present and future
made clearer
2016-06-30 00:25:48 -04:00
Tom Warren 3731bded00 3:14
preserving the one who made the universe in the beginning
2016-06-29 19:20:58 -04:00
Henry Whitney 4c00ea47f1 reordered for clarity 2016-06-29 14:21:30 -04:00
pohlig cfeb5f9422 Update 02.usfm 2016-06-29 11:42:29 -04:00
Henry Whitney 71dad5ff3c extraneous comma 2016-06-29 11:00:50 -04:00
pohlig 0c6eddbbc0 Update 03.usfm 2016-06-29 10:19:57 -04:00
pohlig 7e6ad8acbc Update 03.usfm 2016-06-29 10:17:16 -04:00
Tom Warren 45bcde799f baptism for the dead
commentary in the text
2016-06-29 06:33:45 -04:00
Tom Warren b59fcee29d Clarification
Paul is not able to tell them about the holy
2016-06-29 04:50:33 -04:00
Tom Warren 341b1613b4 Heb 6:11
certainty and showing until the end
2016-06-29 03:48:42 -04:00
Tom Warren e6cc51a671 Stubborn
refuse to obey
2016-06-29 01:52:06 -04:00
Tom Warren 2095266db4 Reworking morning star section 2016-06-29 01:14:06 -04:00
Tom Warren b5ff9d0166 Spirit begins to control him
avoiding a passive
2016-06-29 00:32:50 -04:00
Tom Warren f419bef57c attacks changed to
took control of him
2016-06-28 23:59:36 -04:00
Tom Warren c6a36137aa Clarity on crowns
and olive leaves
2016-06-28 23:46:35 -04:00
Hanker10 6fb4bd7b4a Matt 22:25 cut extra wording
Matt 22:25 cut extra intro word, "Well,"  and "near us" which is not in the text nor needed for the narrative flow.
2016-06-28 21:55:14 -04:00
Hanker10 4a03495ae1 Matt 22:23-24 cut extra wording
Matt 22:23-24 cut extra wording, "They wanted to ask Jesus a question.
\v 24 They said to him," to what you see.
2016-06-28 21:51:08 -04:00
Hanker10 dbd72b88ad Matthew 22:16 cut out a lot
Matthew 22:16 cut out a lot of the material already in the notes that serves here as background information and is not in the narrative text. ", who thought that the Israelites should pay only the tax that the Jewish authorities required them to pay. They also sent some members of the party that supported King Herod. The members of that party thought that the Israelites should pay only the tax that the Roman government required them to pay."
Also, "even if it is an important person who does not like what you teach" to what you see.
2016-06-28 21:46:47 -04:00
Hanker10 549fe2bfd4 Matt 22:3 change wording
Matt 22:3 change wording "The servants went and told the people that." to what you see.
2016-06-28 21:36:49 -04:00
Tom Warren 62530ca405 Mrk 9:19
overuse of exclamation marks and neglect of the question mark
2016-06-28 21:22:09 -04:00
Hanker10 c200286147 Matt 21:43 cut extra clause
Matt 21:43 cut extra clause, "So, because you reject me, I am going to tell you this:" to make it as you see. Also changed the tense of the main verb to the present continuative.
2016-06-28 21:12:58 -04:00
Hanker10 5b103ec639 Matt 21:42 cut extra clause
Matt 21:42 cut extra clause, "That is right, so" This is not in the text, not needed for the narrative flow and gives the impression that Jesus commended the rulers.
2016-06-28 21:08:21 -04:00
Hanker10 56a1be1690 Matt 21:31 change wording about the kingdom
Matt 21:31 change wording about the kingdom
2016-06-28 21:02:18 -04:00
Hanker10 6d8de1ef67 Matt 21:28 cut intro clause
Matt 21:28 cut intro clause "Then Jesus said to the chief priests and elders," This is extra, not in the text and not needed for the narrative.
2016-06-28 20:51:49 -04:00
Hanker10 73b0c22f48 Matt 21:27 change wording
Matt 21:27 change wording. The word "permission" is not proper to render εχουσια. It means "authority" or "right."
2016-06-28 20:44:11 -04:00
Hanker10 1853491673 Matt 21:20 change wording
Matt 21:20 change wording, "We are astonished that" since this just repeats the introductory clause "They were astonished and said..." Also, the quote becomes a question which it is in the Greek NA28.
2016-06-28 20:38:39 -04:00
Hanker10 503394889a Matt 21:19 change wording
Matt 21:19 change wording, "immediately started to dry up." changed to what you see. There is no textual indication of "started to" but only that the tree did dry up immediately.
2016-06-28 20:33:41 -04:00