7764530cfb
1 Cor 7:30 change "shed a tear"
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1 Cor 7:30 change "shed a tear" to what you see because it is an idiom that could be unfamiliar to many. Also, dropped "or in their hearts" after "joy on their faces" because this is added. Also, "they wanted" after "to buy something." These are all additions that qualify the ideas too far.
2016-07-13 13:18:23 -04:00
9ce09929d4
1 Cor 7:21 change word "buy" to "gain"
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1 Cor 7:21 change word "buy" to "gain" since not all slaves had to purchase their freedom and this idea is not in the original
2016-07-13 12:55:30 -04:00
107391498f
1 Cor 7:11 drop last sentence
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1 Cor 7:11 drop last sentence, "These are the commands of the Lord." since this is not in the original and is repeated from verse 10 unnecessarily.
2016-07-13 12:43:08 -04:00
df0db16a31
1 Cor 7:6 change wording
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1 Cor 7:6 change wording to include the concept of concession (as in ULB)
2016-07-13 12:39:21 -04:00
228ebbefa9
1 Cor 6:13 change wording
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1 Cor 6:13 change wording: "person" is too broad a term to represent "stomach."
2016-07-13 10:32:16 -04:00
b81aff5ce9
1 Cor 6:12 correct faulty wording
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1 Cor 6:12 correct faulty wording
2016-07-13 10:23:42 -04:00
e248c2a714
1 Cor 6:10 change wording about the kingdom
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1 Cor 6:10 change wording about the kingdom
2016-07-13 10:20:58 -04:00
4ffcbb6348
1 Cor 6:9 change wording about the kingdom
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1 Cor 6:9 change wording about the kingdom
2016-07-13 10:17:12 -04:00
0f17ab3cf8
1 Cor 6:5 change wording
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1 Cor 6:5 change wording to include the idea of shaming
2016-07-13 10:08:42 -04:00
7d2631d626
1 Cor 6:1 change wording
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1 Cor 6:1 change wording to include the idea of "daring to" since their practice violated the sanctity of the body of believers
2016-07-13 10:00:34 -04:00
Henry Whitney
1f33510e85
extra empty paras
2016-07-13 09:30:12 -04:00
fb678a8761
1 Cor 5:10 change words for clarity
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1 Cor 5:10 change words for clarity
2016-07-12 21:33:58 -04:00
9b04192d61
1 Cor 5:9 change word for clarity
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1 Cor 5:9 change word for clarity: "be with" becomes "keep company with"
2016-07-12 21:28:43 -04:00
3131be8755
1 Cor 5:7 change word for clarity
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1 Cor 5:7 change word for clarity: "affect" becomes "infect"
2016-07-12 21:26:55 -04:00
0fe2f94a5c
1 Cor 5:5 add 2 phrases for clarity
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1 Cor 5:5 add 2 phrases for clarity
2016-07-12 21:24:58 -04:00
0d7361ece1
1 Cor 4:21 change one word
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1 Cor 4:21 change one word: "rod" so that the meaning comes out better
2016-07-12 17:22:42 -04:00
88001c8b9a
1 Cor 4:7 correct wrong noun number
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1 Cor 4:7 correct wrong noun number
2016-07-12 17:17:17 -04:00
2a4b1db682
1 Cor 4:6 correct bad wording
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1 Cor 4:6 correct bad wording
2016-07-12 17:15:33 -04:00
7be4104d54
1 Cor 4:3 change wording
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1 Cor 4:3 change wording. Paul does not say he is not able to judge himself. He does not bother judging himself.
2016-07-12 17:12:05 -04:00
f160bd67ce
1 Cor 3:13 change wording
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1 Cor 3:13 change wording, "how hard we worked for him" to what you see.
2016-07-12 16:54:07 -04:00
4b3ee1d0dd
1 Cor 3:10 change wording
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1 Cor 3:10 change wording to correct idea about Paul's giftedness.
2016-07-12 16:50:44 -04:00
Henry Whitney
828a4fd1f2
typo
2016-07-12 16:43:35 -04:00
Henry Whitney
ab1a8ca559
typo
2016-07-12 16:43:35 -04:00
b29e30e7dd
1 Cor 3:4 change wording
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1 Cor 3:4 change wording: "tearing the church into pieces" is an assumption here. This is probably true, but Paul is working up to this evaluation of the Corinthians. It is too early to let that cat out of the bag here.
2016-07-12 15:57:30 -04:00
c1ceab7596
1 Cor 3:2 change "meat" to "solid food"
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1 Cor 3:2 change "meat" to "solid food"
2016-07-12 15:53:39 -04:00
eccbb0a764
1 Cor 2:15 change one word
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1 Cor 2:15 change one word: "judgment" to "evaluate" since this will avoid the connotation (at least for English speakers) of patronizing dominance over others.
2016-07-12 15:50:30 -04:00
45b66a3ef9
1 Cor 2:3 change wording
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1 Cor 2:3 change wording since there is no indication the weakness was physical. There is also no indication that Paul's trembling was because of enemies. Many say it was because of the awesome responsibility he felt weighing on him and/or because he had just come from Athens where his presentation bombed.
2016-07-12 15:12:16 -04:00
Henry Whitney
54279cf480
κοπιαω has element of difficulty absent in UDB
2016-07-12 14:17:49 -04:00
Henry Whitney
3f2d3b6613
resolved ambiguity of "look"
2016-07-12 14:16:37 -04:00
6c66e17fcb
1 Cor 1:25 change confusing wording
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1 Cor 1:25 change confusing wording. God is not foolish or weak but appears so to the worldly.
2016-07-12 13:57:32 -04:00
aa98f27228
1 Cor 1:18 change "know" to "understand"
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1 Cor 1:18 change "know" to "understand"
2016-07-12 13:51:33 -04:00
b24ab0ccef
1 Cor 1:17 confusing structure changed
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1 Cor 1:17 confusing structure changed
2016-07-12 13:49:51 -04:00
8793409dce
1 Cor 1:10 change wording
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1 Cor 1:10 change wording. "this" to "your" since there is no prior reference to what the argument is.
2016-07-12 13:36:54 -04:00
36ee701aa5
1 Cor 1:9 change wording
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1 Cor 1:9 change wording to avoid the connotation that God's keeping of the promise is only in the future. The original is a statement of fact.
2016-07-12 13:32:29 -04:00
c781d3c30a
1 Cor 1:7 change wording
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1 Cor 1:7 change wording to avoid the connotation that
2016-07-12 13:28:07 -04:00
c488916e01
1 Cor 1:6 change wording
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1 Cor 1:6 change wording to avoid the idea that the confirmation was done by the Corinthians
2016-07-12 13:23:01 -04:00
f29116fbe7
1 Cor 1:5 change wording
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1 Cor 1:5 change wording at the end of the verse. "to speak his truth and to know God" is too restrictive. The speech and the knowledge are general, not just theological.
2016-07-12 10:49:12 -04:00
Henry Whitney
2e2e55f7f6
corrected correction
2016-07-11 16:45:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney
75771b7f2c
removed passive
2016-07-11 16:45:04 -04:00
Henry Whitney
f6f427fa00
3:21-22 clarification
2016-07-11 16:20:54 -04:00
Henry Whitney
62b8179b53
3:18-19 cleanup
2016-07-11 15:26:40 -04:00
Henry Whitney
ccb4d3a6b9
zapped bad commas
2016-07-11 15:22:29 -04:00
Henry Whitney
7a4171025d
3:15 made complete sentence
2016-07-11 15:19:26 -04:00
Henry Whitney
bd9f6e6b98
3:14-15 explicating logic
2016-07-11 15:17:22 -04:00
Henry Whitney
5988458b9e
building materials
2016-07-11 14:30:55 -04:00
Henry Whitney
c2158424e7
the "building" is not a "dwelling"
2016-07-11 12:53:04 -04:00
Henry Whitney
6097f7a528
concretized "dwelling"
2016-07-11 12:49:52 -04:00
Henry Whitney
bc950793f1
connectors
2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
Henry Whitney
370db91ffc
smoothed out clauses
2016-07-11 12:35:53 -04:00
Henry Whitney
d4d6f599de
more concrete vocabulary
2016-07-11 11:59:14 -04:00
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