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1264 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
Hanker10 19767eb826 Romans 12:13 change wording
Romans 12:13 change wording to reflect original more closely
2016-07-09 12:59:44 -04:00
Hanker10 632f2492dd Romans 12:6 change confusing wording
Romans 12:6 change confusing wording
2016-07-09 12:53:30 -04:00
Hanker10 f143130d48 Romans 12:2 change wording
Romans 12:2 change wording to avoid confusion of agency: "and always make it new" implies that the reader will do that but God is the agent to change and to make new the way of thinking.
2016-07-09 12:49:19 -04:00
Hanker10 b8b23e4a60 Romans 11:26 change wording
Romans 11:26 change wording from "will save all the people of Israel" to what you see. Israel is a collective term here not meaning every person.
2016-07-09 12:12:24 -04:00
Hanker10 dfd6d587ab Romans 11:24 change word for consistency
Romans 11:24 change word for consistency from "grafting" to "splicing" to be consistent with verse 17
2016-07-09 12:07:39 -04:00
Hanker10 2f7ea5360f Romans 11:17 change word
Romans 11:17 change word, "put" to "spliced"
2016-07-09 12:00:36 -04:00
Hanker10 ea89a0e4c6 Romans 11:16 change wording for consistency
Romans 11:16 change wording for consistency, "the branches of a tree will be good" to what you see.
2016-07-09 11:57:02 -04:00
Hanker10 fbc4bbda09 Romans 11:15 drop "many" and...
Romans 11:15 drop "many" from "and many other people in the world." And, added "realm of the dead" to the end to correspond to the ULB
2016-07-09 11:53:50 -04:00
Hanker10 8054e8e05a Romans 11:11 change wording
Romans 11:11 change wording
2016-07-09 11:49:18 -04:00
Hanker10 c27832ed77 Romans 11:7 replace word "unable" with "unwilling"
Romans 11:7 replace word "unable" with "unwilling"
2016-07-09 11:46:12 -04:00
Hanker10 8a3cb4b714 Romans 11:5 replace word for clarity
Romans 11:5 replace the word "small" with "leftover" to render "remnant"
2016-07-09 11:34:15 -04:00
Hanker10 35c0bdfc0e Romans 11:1 change wording
Romans 11:1 change wording
2016-07-09 11:28:08 -04:00
Hanker10 850dd0bb40 Romans 10:20 change preposition
Romans 10:20 change preposition from "to" to "through" in "God said very boldly through Isaiah"
2016-07-09 11:18:52 -04:00
Hanker10 1e8308af7a Romans 10:19b close the quote
Romans 10:19b close the quote
2016-07-09 11:17:16 -04:00
Hanker10 259532ea04 Romans 10:18b add quotation marks
Romans 10:18b add quotation marks and generalize from just "the stars" to nature as based on the quote from Psalm 19:4.
2016-07-09 11:15:29 -04:00
Hanker10 76afbd1043 Romans 10:14 change wording
Romans 10:14 change wording to broaden the idea of spreading the good news beyond just the Jews as first rendered.
2016-07-09 11:02:19 -04:00
Hanker10 860f56ff3e Romans 10:4 drop "for us" at the end
Romans 10:4 drop "for us" at the end of the sentence because it has the connotation of limiting.
2016-07-09 10:52:43 -04:00
Hanker10 df0bc093a1 Romans 10:2 replace word
Romans 10:2 replace word "greatly" with "earnestly"
2016-07-09 10:50:58 -04:00
Hanker10 3d88fc3c53 Romans 9:32 change wording
Romans 9:32 change wording
2016-07-08 21:47:32 -04:00
Hanker10 38915c27fa Romans 9:29 change wording
Romans 9:29 change wording
2016-07-08 21:38:28 -04:00
Hanker10 f1e46be1a8 Romans 9:26 add phrase to clarify
Romans 9:26 add phrase to clarify
2016-07-08 21:35:38 -04:00
Hanker10 59e0e5cda1 Update 09.usfm 2016-07-08 21:32:08 -04:00
Hanker10 5b9e31efdb Romans 9:19 change wording
Romans 9:19 change wording for clarity
2016-07-08 21:30:14 -04:00
Hanker10 688f57fbaa Romans 9:17 change wording
Romans 9:17 change wording
2016-07-08 21:24:44 -04:00
Hanker10 d799942f55 Romans 9:8 correct wording
Romans 9:8 correct wording
2016-07-08 21:19:33 -04:00
Hanker10 e42a005c20 Romans 9:4 change wording
Romans 9:4 change wording of verbs to present tense and cut some of the phrases limiting the concepts too narrowly.
2016-07-08 21:15:05 -04:00
pohlig a21652c188 Update 06.usfm 2016-07-08 17:29:28 -04:00
pohlig f9d78ba221 Update 06.usfm 2016-07-08 17:27:38 -04:00
pohlig bc3f10f2cb Update 04.usfm 2016-07-08 17:25:48 -04:00
pohlig 4a0f0e2fe0 Update 02.usfm 2016-07-08 17:19:28 -04:00
pohlig 2df6aae0d8 Update 02.usfm 2016-07-08 17:18:52 -04:00
Henry Whitney 017b4d00f2 removed comma splice 2016-07-08 16:47:51 -04:00
Hanker10 27a5918402 Romans 8:38 clarify wording
Romans 8:38 clarify wording
2016-07-08 16:44:05 -04:00
Hanker10 c29b1808f5 Romans 8:35 cut extra wording
Romans 8:35 cut extra wording
2016-07-08 16:41:28 -04:00
Henry Whitney 15d85fed92 spurious comma 2016-07-08 16:40:43 -04:00
Henry Whitney 060a05f383 spurious comma 2016-07-08 16:40:43 -04:00
Hanker10 b6a212d6d6 Romans 8:34 update wording
Romans 8:34 update wording from left-over ULB
2016-07-08 16:39:20 -04:00
Hanker10 8404d6d8d5 Romans 8:32 cut extra wording not needed
Romans 8:32 cut extra wording not needed
2016-07-08 16:37:18 -04:00
Hanker10 535e57675d Romans 8:30 clarify wording
Romans 8:30 clarify wording
2016-07-08 16:35:20 -04:00
Hanker10 76fb2464a6 Romans 8:27 clarify wording
Romans 8:27 clarify wording
2016-07-08 16:32:54 -04:00
Hanker10 7a634e921c Romans 8:21 clarify wording
Romans 8:21 clarify wording
2016-07-08 16:30:16 -04:00
Hanker10 48caf478c1 Romans 8:17 change wording
Romans 8:17 change wording for clarity
2016-07-08 16:27:32 -04:00
Hanker10 639ce2bead Romans 8:13 change wording
Romans 8:13 change wording
2016-07-08 16:24:20 -04:00
Hanker10 14a84f76df Romans 8:12 change wording
Romans 8:12 change wording
2016-07-08 16:22:42 -04:00
Henry Whitney 29207ff4a2 1:27 smoothed out grammar 2016-07-08 16:15:34 -04:00
pohlig fc48b56883 Update 01.usfm 2016-07-08 16:04:24 -04:00
Hanker10 61563abcc2 Romans 8:6-8 change wording of "nature"
Romans 8:6-8 change wording of "nature"
2016-07-08 15:53:03 -04:00
Henry Whitney 9e413fd5b3 1:24 restored TFT
To say that "Christ is his power and the [his?] wisdom" is highly
abstract.
2016-07-08 15:52:51 -04:00
Hanker10 aa957ff7c1 Romans 8:4-5 change wording
Romans 8:4-5 change wording
2016-07-08 15:51:12 -04:00
Hanker10 fa8192635e Romans 7:25 cut the application wording
Romans 7:25 cut the application wording, "you and I"
2016-07-08 15:45:14 -04:00