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 \v 16 One day, while Jesus was walking along by the Sea of Galilee, he saw two men, Simon and Simon's brother Andrew. They were casting their fishing net into the sea. They earned money by catching and selling fish.
 \v 17 Then Jesus said to them, "Just like you have been gathering fish, come with me and I will teach you how to gather people."
-\v 18 Immediately they left their nets and they went with him.
+\v 18 Immediately they left their nets, and they went with him.
 
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 \v 19 After they had gone on a little further, Jesus saw two other men, James and James's brother John. They were the sons of a man named Zebedee. They were both in a boat mending fishing nets.
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 \v 10 I will show you that the Son of Man has authority on earth to forgive sins." Then he said to the paralyzed man,
 \v 11 "Get up! Pick up your sleeping pad and go home!"
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-\v 12 The man stood up immediately! He picked up the sleeping pad and then he went away, while all the people there were watching. They were all amazed and they praised God and said, "We have never before seen anything like what happened just now!"
+\v 12 The man stood up immediately! He picked up the sleeping pad, and then he went away, while all the people there were watching. They were all amazed, and they praised God and said, "We have never before seen anything like what happened just now!"
 
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 \v 14 The men who were tending the pigs ran and reported in the town and the countryside what had happened. Many people went to see for themselves what had happened.
-\v 15 They came to the place where Jesus was. Then they saw the man whom evil spirits had previously controlled. He was sitting there with clothes on and he was mentally sound. They were afraid when they saw all this.
+\v 15 They came to the place where Jesus was. Then they saw the man whom evil spirits had previously controlled. He was sitting there with clothes on, and he was mentally sound. They were afraid when they saw all this.
 
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 \v 16 The people who had seen the events told those who had come from the town and from the countryside about what had happened to the man whom the evil spirits previously controlled. They also described what had happened to the pigs.
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 \v 45 Right away Jesus told his disciples to get into the boat and then go ahead of him to Bethsaida, which was further around the Sea of Galilee. He stayed and dismissed the many people who were there.
 \v 46 After he said goodbye to the people, he went up into the hills to pray.
-\v 47 When it was evening, the disciples' boat was in the middle of the lake and Jesus was by himself on the land.
+\v 47 When it was evening, the disciples' boat was in the middle of the lake, and Jesus was by himself on the land.
 
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 \v 48 He saw that the wind was blowing against them as they rowed. As a result, they were having great difficulty. He approached them early in the morning, when it was still dark, by walking on the water. He intended to walk by them.
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 \v 4 Two prophets who had lived long ago, Moses and Elijah, appeared to them. Then the two of them began talking with Jesus.
 \v 5 After a short time, Peter said, "Teacher, it is wonderful to be here! So allow us to make three shelters. One will be for you, one will be for Moses, and one will be for Elijah!"
-\v 6 He said this because he wanted to say something but he did not know what to say. He and the other two disciples were terrified.
+\v 6 He said this because he wanted to say something, but he did not know what to say. He and the other two disciples were terrified.
 
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