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 \q2 The reports that you heard in the Island of Cyprus about Tyre are true.
 \b
 \q1
-\v 2 You people who live along the coast near Tyre, and merchants of the city of Sidon, mourn silently.
-\q2 Your sailors went across the seas to many places like Tyre.
+\v 2 You people who live along the coast, you merchants of the city of Sidon, mourn silently.
+\q2 Your sailors went across the seas to make you rich.
 \q1
 \v 3 They sailed across deep seas
-\q2 to buy grain in Egypt
-\q1 and other crops that are grown along the Nile River.
-\q2 Tyre became the city where people from all nations bought and sold goods.
+\q2 to buy grain in Egypt, grain from the Valley of Shihor.
+\q2 This wealth came down the Nile River, and you, Sidon, were the place where the people of all nations traded.
 \b
 
 \s5