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 The term "strong drink" refers to drinks that have been fermented and have alcohol in them.
 
-* Alcoholic drinks are made from either grain or fruit and have undergone a process of fermentation.
-* Kinds of "strong drink" include grape wine, palm wine, beer, and apple cider. In the Bible, grape wine is the most frequently mentioned strong drink.
+* Alcoholic drinks are made from either grain or fruit and have undergone fermentation.
+* Kinds of "strong drink" include grape wine, palm wine, beer, and apple cider. In the Bible, grape wine was the most frequently mentioned strong drink.
 * Priests and anyone who took a special vow such as the "Nazirite vow" were not permitted to drink fermented drinks.
-* This term could also be translated as, "fermented drink" or "alcoholic drink."
+* This term could also be translated as "fermented drink" or "alcoholic drink."
 
 (See also: [grape](../other/grape.md), [Nazirite](../other/nazirite.md), [vow](../kt/vow.md), [wine](../other/wine.md))