diff --git a/bible/other/hang/01.md b/bible/other/hang/01.md
index 551ded6d..bc91f0f6 100644
--- a/bible/other/hang/01.md
+++ b/bible/other/hang/01.md
@@ -4,11 +4,10 @@
 
 The term "hang" means to suspend something or someone above the ground.
 
-* Death by hanging typically is done using a rope noose that is tied around a person's neck and suspended from an elevated object, like a tree limb. Judas killed himself by hanging.
-* Jesus' death by hanging on a wooden cross was done differently: the soldiers suspended him by nailing his hands (or wrists) and his feet to the cross.
-* To hang someone always refers to a way of killing someone by hanging them with a rope around their neck.
+* Death by hanging typically is done by tying a rope that is tied around a person's neck and sustending him from an elevated object, like a tree limb. Judas killed himself by hanging.
+* Although Jesus died while hanging on a wooden cross, there was nothing around his neck: the soldiers suspended him by nailing his hands (or wrists) and his feet to the cross.
+* To hang someone always refers to the way of killing someone by hanging them with a rope around their neck.
 
-(See also:)
 
 ## Bible References: ##