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 The term "strife" refers to physical or emotional conflict between people.
 
-* A person who causes strife does things that result in strong disagreements and hurt feelings between people.
-* Strife sometimes implies that strong emotions are involved, such as anger or bitterness.
-* Other ways to translate this term could include, "disagreement" or "dispute" or "conflict."
+* A person who causes strife does things that result in strong disagreements between people and in hurt feelings.
+* Sometimes the use of the word “strife” implies that strong emotions are involved, such as anger or bitterness.
+* Other ways to translate this term could include "disagreement" or "dispute" or "conflict."
 
 (See also: [angry](../other/angry.md))