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-# For example, if a man goes into the forest ... to cut wood
+# For example, if a man goes into the forest ... and kills him
 
-The author gives a hypothetical situation where a person accidentally kills another person. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-hypo]])
+The author gives an example of how someone might accidentally kill his neighbor.
 
 # the ax head slips off of the handle
 
@@ -12,5 +12,5 @@ This means the head of the ax hits and kills the neighbor.
 
 # to one of these cities and save his life
 
-It is implied that the family of the dead man may try to get revenge. The man who killed him can flee to one of these cities, and the people there would protect him. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
+It is implied that the family of the dead man may try to get revenge. The man who killed him can flee to one of these cities, and the people there will protect him. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])