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 # The eye that mocks ... mother will be pecked out by the ravens of the valley and will be eaten by the vultures
 
-The eye is a synecdoche for the whole person. The writer is saying that a person who mocks his parents will die alone in a wilderness and not be buried, a metaphor for dying with no friends or family to care. This can be translated in active form. Alternate translation: "The ravens of the valley will peck out the eyes of the person who mocks ... mother, and the vultures will eat them" or "A person who mocks ... mother will die alone, and no one will mourn their death" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-synecdoche]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-activepassive]])
+"The ravens of the valley will peck out the eyes of the person who mocks ... mother, and the vultures will eat them"
 
 # scorns obedience to a mother
 
-The word "obedience" is a metonym for the mother herself. It is also an abstract noun that can be stated as "obey." Alternate translation: "considers his mother worthless and will not obey her" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-abstractnouns]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])
+"considers his mother worthless and will not obey her"
 
 # ravens
 
@@ -12,5 +12,4 @@ large, shiny, black birds that eat plants and dead animals
 
 # vultures
 
-any one of several large birds that eat dead animals and have small, featherless heads
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+any one of several large birds that eat dead animals and have small, featherless heads
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