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 # For sin took the opportunity through the commandment and deceived me. Through the commandment it killed me
 
-As in [Romans 7:7-8](./07.md), Paul is describing sin as a person who can do 3 things: take the opportunity, deceive, and kill. Alternate translation: "Because I wanted to sin, I deceived myself into thinking that I could sin and obey the commandment at the same time, but God punished me for disobeying the commandment by separating me from him" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-personification]])
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-# sin
-
-"my desire to sin"
+"Because I wanted to sin, I deceived myself into thinking that I could sin and obey the commandment at the same time, but God punished me for disobeying the commandment by separating me from him"
 
 # took the opportunity through the commandment
 
-Paul is comparing sin to a person who can act. See how you translated this in [Romans 7:8](../07/08.md). (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-personification]])
+Paul is comparing sin to a person who can act.
 
 # it killed me
 
-Paul speaks of God's condemnation on sinners as if it resulted primarily in physical death. Alternate translation: "it separated me from God" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metaphor]])
+"it separated me from God"