diff --git a/1co/01/01.md b/1co/01/01.md
index 9cc302e40c..6fde9b6aec 100644
--- a/1co/01/01.md
+++ b/1co/01/01.md
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ This can be stated in active form. AT: "whom God has called to be holy people" (
 
 # their Lord and ours
 
-Jesus is the Lord of Paul and the Corinthians and the same Lord of all the churches. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-inclusive]])
+The word "ours" includes Paul's audience. Jesus is the Lord of Paul and the Corinthians and all the churches. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-inclusive]])
 
 # translationWords
 
diff --git a/1co/07/20.md b/1co/07/20.md
index b2502ff507..a07938dab1 100644
--- a/1co/07/20.md
+++ b/1co/07/20.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # General Information:
 
-Here the words "us" and "we" refers to all Christians. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-inclusive]])
+Here the words "us" and "we" refer to all Christians and include Paul's audience. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-inclusive]])
 
 # remain in the calling
 
diff --git a/1co/08/04.md b/1co/08/04.md
index 22aaba4dd9..1e4e056416 100644
--- a/1co/08/04.md
+++ b/1co/08/04.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # General Information:
 
-"We" and "us" here refers to all believers. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-inclusive]])
+"We" and "us" here refer to all believers and include Paul's audience. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-inclusive]])
 
 # We know that an idol in this world is nothing and that there is no God but one
 
diff --git a/1pe/03/18.md b/1pe/03/18.md
index ee196e4d53..254b6b9703 100644
--- a/1pe/03/18.md
+++ b/1pe/03/18.md
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Peter explains how Christ suffered and what Christ accomplished by suffering.
 
 # suffered for us
 
-The word "us" refers to Peter and the audience. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-inclusive]])
+The word "us" includes the people Peter was writing to. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-inclusive]])
 
 # so that he would bring us to God
 
diff --git a/1pe/front/intro.md b/1pe/front/intro.md
index 56ccc54f90..43e80a004b 100644
--- a/1pe/front/intro.md
+++ b/1pe/front/intro.md
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ This letter was probably written from Rome. He gave Rome the symbolic name of "B
 ## Part 3: Important Translation Issues ##
 
 #### Singular and plural "you" ####
-In this book, the word "I" refers to Peter, except for two places: [1 Peter 1:16](../01/15.md) and [1 Peter 2:6](../02/06.md). The word "you" is always plural and refers to the believers in the dispersion. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-exclusive]] and [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-you]])
+In this book, the word "I" refers to Peter, except for two places: [1 Peter 1:16](../01/15.md) and [1 Peter 2:6](../02/06.md). The word "you" is always plural and refers to the believers in the dispersion. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-you]])
 
 #### What are the major issues in the text of the Book of 1 Peter? ####
 
diff --git a/1sa/26/11.md b/1sa/26/11.md
index 3a8be71925..b3ab3ac19e 100644
--- a/1sa/26/11.md
+++ b/1sa/26/11.md
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ The hand is a metonym for the harm a hand can do. AT: "do anything to harm" (See
 
 # let us go
 
-David includes Abishai, so the "us" here is inclusive. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-inclusive]])
+David includes Abishai, so the word "us" here is inclusive. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-inclusive]])
 
 # a deep sleep from Yahweh had fallen on them