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 ### Who wrote 2 Thessalonians?
 
-Paul wrote 2 Thessalonians. He was from the city of Tarsus. He had been known as Saul in his early life. Before becoming a Christian, Paul was a Pharisee. He persecuted Christians. After he became a Christian, he traveled several times throughout the Roman Empire telling people about Jesus.
+Paul wrote 2 Thessalonians. He was from the city of Tarsus. He had been known as Saul in his early life and before becoming a Christian, Paul was a Pharisee who persecuted Christians. After he became a Christian, he traveled several times throughout the Roman Empire telling people about Jesus.
 
 Paul wrote this letter while staying in the city of Corinth.