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@@ -4,9 +4,8 @@ Wisdom speaks to the people in verses 4-36.
 
 # my voice is for the sons of mankind
 
-Here "voice" represents the words that are spoken. Alternate translation: "my words are for the sons of mankind" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])
+"my words are for the sons of mankind". The addressee of this chapter is broader than "my son," but is personal like the previous chapters' use of "my son." In this case, Wisdom is calling out for all to come and learn of her, in contrast to the adulteress mentioned in chapters 5-7. 
 
 # the sons of mankind
 
-This is metonymy representing all human beings. Alternate translation: "all people" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/jit/figs-metonymy]])
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+"all people"
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