diff --git a/ezk/18/06.md b/ezk/18/06.md
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@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ The idiom "lift up his eyes" refers to looking toward something. With reference
 
 The word "house" is a metonym for the family that lives in the house, in this case the Israelites, the descendants of Jacob over many years. See how you translated this in [Ezekiel 3:1](../03/01.md). Alternate translation: "the Israelite people group" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-metonymy]])
 
-# approached a woman during her monthly period
+# approach a woman during her monthly period
 
-It is implicit that he has not approached a woman in order to sleep with her. Alternate translation: "approached a woman to sleep with her during her monthly period" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
+It is implicit that he has not approached a woman in order to sleep with her. Alternate translation: "tried to sleep with a woman during her monthly period" (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/figs-explicit]])
 
diff --git a/num/27/12.md b/num/27/12.md
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@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-# mountains of Abarim
+# this mountain of Abarim
 
-This is a range of mountains in Moab. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
+"this mountain in the Abarim range" Abarim was a range or line of mountains in Moab. (See: [[rc://en/ta/man/translate/translate-names]])
 
 # that I have given to the people of Israel